The Two of Me
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The scriptures can always be likened to events in our everyday life and it is amazing how history continues to repeate itself! Your story made me smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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The scriptures can always be likened to events in our everyday life and it is amazing how history continues to repeate itself! Your story made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and insights.
Seems man repeats sins of the past.
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good piece of writing, GMartinez247. I think you told a wonderful fable that reflects your philosophy of life and your faith came through. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This was a good piece of writing, GMartinez247. I think you told a wonderful fable that reflects your philosophy of life and your faith came through. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and I am Greatful for your kind wishes.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Everyone should have a pondering stone, and your short fable gives a good description of why. I love and agree with the moral of your story. One of my favorite lines "don't wait for the vultures to circle in slow". Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Everyone should have a pondering stone, and your short fable gives a good description of why. I love and agree with the moral of your story. One of my favorite lines "don't wait for the vultures to circle in slow". Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and Good Luck wishes.
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from kiwijenny
Amen ...I need a pondering stone. I need to contemplate Bible Scripture more.
Thank you for the reminder.. I don't want to get too busy to nurture my soul'
We feed our bodies three or more times a day..why not our soul which will last for ever
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Amen ...I need a pondering stone. I need to contemplate Bible Scripture more.
Thank you for the reminder.. I don't want to get too busy to nurture my soul'
We feed our bodies three or more times a day..why not our soul which will last for ever
God bless
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Amen, Thank you for the review and insights,
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Great poem that carries wisdom. We have such an empty, barren world of lack of faith that we must always remember Higher Power and follow His wisdom, carrying it a pocket of our hearts. Who we are rides on the winds of determination.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Great poem that carries wisdom. We have such an empty, barren world of lack of faith that we must always remember Higher Power and follow His wisdom, carrying it a pocket of our hearts. Who we are rides on the winds of determination.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Amen. Thank you for the review and Kind words.