Comment from Judy Swanson

Excellent

If only it were that easy! And, if only he hadn't called her dummy!!! There might be a chance after all. Well done in so few words. Wonder how it all worked out a couple of months down the road...

Judy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019

Comment from Chris Davies

Excellent

A nice twist! Who doesn't like a common enemy? It's enough to drive them back together. The picture was perfect, too. I wish you good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. - Chris

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Too easy! I'm a sucker for short stories and happy endings and this little story of yours had both. Keep it simple... if only our lives could be like this.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,

LOL

Great short write and very well done. Nothing at all to suggest improving upon.

Great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, if only it was that simple? I enjoyed your flash fiction here and wish you luck with the contest, you fulfilled the brief, marriages are complex and you simplified it, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I enjoyed this read, unknown author. It was attention grabbing at the beginning and a really nice ending that made me smile. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019