Black Cadillac
Do you recall a magical night?13 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Had a few "Memorable rides" in our cars also both still miss them old drive-in theaters and "Pink Hotels", Good submission, Good Luck in the contest. May God Bless and all family members.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Had a few "Memorable rides" in our cars also both still miss them old drive-in theaters and "Pink Hotels", Good submission, Good Luck in the contest. May God Bless and all family members.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed my anniversary story BLACK CADILLAC. Thank you so much for your review. Rod
Comment from SueZen
Great tale, nice'n old-fashioned romantic, celebrating 40th wedding anniversary and many happy memories and first magical night in Hideaway and they can always 'pretend' they are driving to that same spot again in the black Cadillac when they have finished the gorgeous meal.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Great tale, nice'n old-fashioned romantic, celebrating 40th wedding anniversary and many happy memories and first magical night in Hideaway and they can always 'pretend' they are driving to that same spot again in the black Cadillac when they have finished the gorgeous meal.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed BLACK CADILLAC, Sue. It was fun to write. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Connie C
What a sweet story this is, Rod. Reminds me of my parents and the gold Cadillac they cherished but also of the special love they shared, just like the couple in your story.
Very well done, including good use of dialogue.
Connie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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What a sweet story this is, Rod. Reminds me of my parents and the gold Cadillac they cherished but also of the special love they shared, just like the couple in your story.
Very well done, including good use of dialogue.
Connie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I am so pleased BLACK CADILLAC brought back memories of your parents, Connie. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from LisaMay
This is a really lovely story of a couple comfortable in their love for each other after 40 years. The black caddie is a symbol of raunchier times that awakens reminiscing and then a streak of naughty steps in. I do hope their current car is not a Fiat 500... older people are not as agile... I wouldn't want either of them to put their back out!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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This is a really lovely story of a couple comfortable in their love for each other after 40 years. The black caddie is a symbol of raunchier times that awakens reminiscing and then a streak of naughty steps in. I do hope their current car is not a Fiat 500... older people are not as agile... I wouldn't want either of them to put their back out!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Hi Lisa. I am so pleased you enjoyed BLACK CADILLAC. It is another of my Meg and Allen stories which are fun to write. You recently saw him teasing a former student in a grocery store. Rod
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I am glad they are fun to write, because they are fun to read too.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Rod :)
I enjoyed your heartwarming story and thought you incorporated the black Cadillac in a really natural way. I liked how it wasn't the focal part of the story, but it still played an integral part.
Very nicely done.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Hello Rod :)
I enjoyed your heartwarming story and thought you incorporated the black Cadillac in a really natural way. I liked how it wasn't the focal part of the story, but it still played an integral part.
Very nicely done.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed sharing Meg and Allen?s anniversary dinner, Debra. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, I loved how you draw on those magical memories of your youth to create this night in Hideaway woods! Stealing a few kisses! Best wishes Rod, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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He he he, I loved how you draw on those magical memories of your youth to create this night in Hideaway woods! Stealing a few kisses! Best wishes Rod, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Indeed I was able to recall many "magical memories" while I wrote this, Dolly. Thank you for sharing and your best wishes. Rod
Comment from Sally Law
Gonna have to give you a sixer! Sugar sweet this is. I've been married forever to my darling husband and can easily relate to this gushing story. You did an outstanding job within a short word count for this contest. I enjoyed this Rod-- thank you!
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Gonna have to give you a sixer! Sugar sweet this is. I've been married forever to my darling husband and can easily relate to this gushing story. You did an outstanding job within a short word count for this contest. I enjoyed this Rod-- thank you!
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Sally, for your enthusiastic response to BLACK CADILLAC. I am especially pleased you can relate so easily to Allen and Meg. Many thanks, too, for the six-star bonus. Rod
Comment from Chris Davies
That's a wonderful memory, and I liked the way you wove the topic into the poem. Very sweet and well done. Thanks for sharing and I wish you good luck in the contest! - Chris
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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That's a wonderful memory, and I liked the way you wove the topic into the poem. Very sweet and well done. Thanks for sharing and I wish you good luck in the contest! - Chris
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This one was fun to write, Chris. I am so pleased you enjoyed it so much. Rod
Comment from Sugarray77
Rod this is just magical and so well written. I enjoyed the description of the love shared and the romantic memories. Good format and execution of the prompt. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Rod this is just magical and so well written. I enjoyed the description of the love shared and the romantic memories. Good format and execution of the prompt. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I am thrilled you found BLACK CADILLAC "magical and well-written," Melissa. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Rod,
Nicely written short story here and a very good contest entry. Your concise writing style tells the reader so much about the couple in so few words.
Best of luck in the voting booth.
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Rod,
Nicely written short story here and a very good contest entry. Your concise writing style tells the reader so much about the couple in so few words.
Best of luck in the voting booth.
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Jan. I am delighted you enjoyed BLACK CADILLAC, especially Meg and Allen. It was fun to share their story. Rod