Twittering
A Monostich Entry9 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is excellent; the monostitch format really suits the succinct delivery, a cautionary tale about living with freedom but being prepared. I like the concept of giving your words wings... they can take you anywhere on flights of fancy. And I guess the 'flight pattern' could mean a decision about whether the words are to fit a poem or a flash fiction story or a script etc.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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This is excellent; the monostitch format really suits the succinct delivery, a cautionary tale about living with freedom but being prepared. I like the concept of giving your words wings... they can take you anywhere on flights of fancy. And I guess the 'flight pattern' could mean a decision about whether the words are to fit a poem or a flash fiction story or a script etc.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Monostich about giving you words wings after you make sure you know the flight plan is safe and well planned for a safe landing elsewhere.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Monostich about giving you words wings after you make sure you know the flight plan is safe and well planned for a safe landing elsewhere.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights. We do need to make sure our words land properly without causing unnecessary damage!
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is the second very clever monostitch that I have read. I love your words and your title. If we are talking Trump, many words should not be given wings. But that is neither here nor there.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This is the second very clever monostitch that I have read. I love your words and your title. If we are talking Trump, many words should not be given wings. But that is neither here nor there.
Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my one liner!
Comment from Mark D. R.
very nice monostitch entry with a great accompanying illustration (I try to use FanArt for my verses too)
like especially:
... words wings ...
... flight pattern first
minor suggestion: while your entry is a one-liner, FS space dictates two lines for your display, so consider starting your 2nd line with 'but make sure ... you might center both lines too!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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very nice monostitch entry with a great accompanying illustration (I try to use FanArt for my verses too)
like especially:
... words wings ...
... flight pattern first
minor suggestion: while your entry is a one-liner, FS space dictates two lines for your display, so consider starting your 2nd line with 'but make sure ... you might center both lines too!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks for reading and sharing your insights..
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Author,
Ha ha ha
This a great monostitch and a super contest entry. Good luck!
Sound advice you impart here.
Sadly, we all know what it looks like and the resultant impact when a moron takes to twitter. :-/
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi Author,
Ha ha ha
This a great monostitch and a super contest entry. Good luck!
Sound advice you impart here.
Sadly, we all know what it looks like and the resultant impact when a moron takes to twitter. :-/
Thanks for sharing,
Jan
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed my monostich on tweeting. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, unknown poet. This was sage advice and you really summed it up in a few well- selected words. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, unknown poet. This was sage advice and you really summed it up in a few well- selected words. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed my monostich on tweeting. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
Comment from zanya
HOw utterly appropriate in these times and so well penned within a poem with just one line to get the message across as it were - great use of the format -lovely pic
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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HOw utterly appropriate in these times and so well penned within a poem with just one line to get the message across as it were - great use of the format -lovely pic
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed my monostich on tweeting. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review. And I thank you for the generous rating!
Comment from Jaye Bennett
The poet has managed to put a lot of power in this one-line poem. I like "Give your words wings. I also like the common-sense approach to "have a flight pattern first." Really good picture to emphasize the good advice. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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The poet has managed to put a lot of power in this one-line poem. I like "Give your words wings. I also like the common-sense approach to "have a flight pattern first." Really good picture to emphasize the good advice. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed my monostich on tweeting. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
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You're Welcome.
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses to Think before we tweet,
As us Bird brains do. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses to Think before we tweet,
As us Bird brains do. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed my monostich on tweeting. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.