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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Surgery Survey Results "
Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez

10 total reviews 
Comment from Miss Sherry
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That is some wound! How very cleverly you worked this into a poem for the contest. Reminds me of my open heart surgery scar. All I can say is, ouch! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much, I hoped anyone with a major surgery could appreciate it.
    God's Healings and Blessings
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Monostich. I would not recommend anyone to start laughing too hard while they are still in stitches after surgery, they may burst open and the stitches tear out.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and insight into my bazaar humor, I am still seeking Forgiveness Daily✌🏽
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Irreverent medical situation and illustration - very funny!

9 out of 10 only? LOL

Don't thing your medico needs to be capitalized; 'monostitch' is your choice

Good luck in this contest

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
    Most Surveys Stated that in the past now it's 99.9 %
    God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This one is so clever that it took me a second to figure it out. Your descriptive line helped out a lot. Once I figured out what was going on with the survey, I actually said "oh, that's good."
It is good. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and reaction, very competitive field. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from JudyE
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This is so clever. It's glaringly obvious that a 'monosti(t)ch' wouldn't work here. And the staples look like metal. I hope it didn't leave a giant scar although I can't imagine that it didn't.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
    A little pun.
    Thanks for the review and Kind words.
Comment from 24chas
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I liked this read, unknown poet. It's amazing where we can find inspiration sometimes. I bet that did leave a scar. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and time to read my posting. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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They weren't leaving anything to chance there, were they?!

Sometimes the best way to conquer these really short forms of poetry is with humour. Having said that, I don't think I've ever won any contests using that strategy!

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    It's actually something I've lived to tell about and bring up as an awareness issue. Thank you for the review. I also get to collect future book writing material at the same time.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Author,

LOL

Great monostitch and super entry. I think you've got astrong contender here. :-)

Best of luck in the voting.

Nothing here for me suggest you improve upon. The image is perfect.

Thanks for sharing,

Jan

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you for sharing the kind wishes and positive encouragement.
Comment from RodG
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I really like how you used the prompt to play on words. On a more serious note, I can see why nine of ten stitches would agree such a technique would not work.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Interesting ending will keep it in mind.
    Thanks for the review and insight on this poem concept construction,
Comment from Raul1
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This is a very good monostich poem. I think surgeries are very hard to do and they require careful stitching. I like this poem. It's well written. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    The photo I downloaded my stitches long removed. Thank you for the review and Good Luck wishes.
    God's Blessings to you.
reply by Raul1 on 17-Feb-2019
    You're welcome!