God Speaks
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about walking and talking on a daily basis until we can understand His requirements. We have to live in unity without evil ways to undermine others.
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A very well-written poem about walking and talking on a daily basis until we can understand His requirements. We have to live in unity without evil ways to undermine others.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
Comment from sfharper
Wonderful motivational and inspirational poem. How brave you are to try such a challenging acrostic. You did well fulfilling that goal. Perhaps a bit of punctuation might help. It reads well, enjoyed reading it.
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Wonderful motivational and inspirational poem. How brave you are to try such a challenging acrostic. You did well fulfilling that goal. Perhaps a bit of punctuation might help. It reads well, enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Dr Alcreator, Wow you sure tackled this quest with conviction and created a worthy piece for this contest. (.I wouldn't even attempt this one bit admire your well written acrostic) Good luck in the contest it should poll highly Cheers Christine
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Hi Dr Alcreator, Wow you sure tackled this quest with conviction and created a worthy piece for this contest. (.I wouldn't even attempt this one bit admire your well written acrostic) Good luck in the contest it should poll highly Cheers Christine
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was an extremely well written acrostic and contest entry. You managed easily to use God's name 22 times and without it sounding to much and taking over the poem. Living is another word you used a lot, living with God is the only way to live. So well done, my friend, Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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This was an extremely well written acrostic and contest entry. You managed easily to use God's name 22 times and without it sounding to much and taking over the poem. Living is another word you used a lot, living with God is the only way to live. So well done, my friend, Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Congratulations on being able to enter this contest. It just seemed very restrictive and tough to comply with the rules, but it appears that you've definitely succeeded. You have a lot of interesting phrases, my favorites: losing our human values, understanding God is not enough. Best of luck with the contest, but aren't you the creator of it?
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Congratulations on being able to enter this contest. It just seemed very restrictive and tough to comply with the rules, but it appears that you've definitely succeeded. You have a lot of interesting phrases, my favorites: losing our human values, understanding God is not enough. Best of luck with the contest, but aren't you the creator of it?
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
Comment from Miss Sherry
This seemed a complicated form to me, but you have done well with it. I like that there are no rhymes, it fits your poem well. Of course, a write with God in it 22 times is a joy to me. Very well done, dear Poet!
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This seemed a complicated form to me, but you have done well with it. I like that there are no rhymes, it fits your poem well. Of course, a write with God in it 22 times is a joy to me. Very well done, dear Poet!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from Liberty Justice
BEAUTIFUL! This is a very highly spiritual telling us to live better and follow the teachings of God And Jesus Christ, Our Lord and Savior and admonishing us to change our wrongful ways. Your poem flows with high regard and spiritual attributes. WELL DONE. Read mine, also. lolol liberty justice
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BEAUTIFUL! This is a very highly spiritual telling us to live better and follow the teachings of God And Jesus Christ, Our Lord and Savior and admonishing us to change our wrongful ways. Your poem flows with high regard and spiritual attributes. WELL DONE. Read mine, also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
Some well chosen phrases, and faith concepts, as well as following the complex rules of the prompt, leaving me a bit overwhelmed by it all...an excellent post.
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Some well chosen phrases, and faith concepts, as well as following the complex rules of the prompt, leaving me a bit overwhelmed by it all...an excellent post.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from l.raven
HI Al, He has a love for us my friend like know other...and no it is not enough just to say I understand Him...you have got to show Him you believe...have faith in Him...read the Bible...follow Him...very well written....and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
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HI Al, He has a love for us my friend like know other...and no it is not enough just to say I understand Him...you have got to show Him you believe...have faith in Him...read the Bible...follow Him...very well written....and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hello Alcreator litt dear, Your poem, Walk Talk With God And Guide Us Living, is a really nice Acrostic. I enjoyed reading it very much. You did well with the writing prompt. :)
However... I know there is no contest going on or anything now, and so I know there isn't any reason to change anything, and no need to really as it's a fine poem in any case... but as to the contest rules...
Use the word "God" 22 times, including the title. I won't reiterate word for word the rules as you can see them above, but the long and short of them are that you can't write the form of the word in any other way than as "God". Not in caps, or plural, not possessive, not as a pronoun or a compound word, or tethered to any other word in any way. It has to stand on its own and be simply, God. No bells, no whistles.
Thirteen times you used the word, God. Nine times you used, God's. Once you used a compound word, God-warned. Once you used a pronoun. That's 24 times, including the title, which is two more than you were allowed as the rules called for exactly 22. (even though really you used 13 plus a bunch that you shouldn't have used.)
So, I guess it's a good thing the contest, whenever it was, is done and over with! Pay attention to all the rules! :)
The poem is good and stands on its own as it is... :)
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Hello Alcreator litt dear, Your poem, Walk Talk With God And Guide Us Living, is a really nice Acrostic. I enjoyed reading it very much. You did well with the writing prompt. :)
However... I know there is no contest going on or anything now, and so I know there isn't any reason to change anything, and no need to really as it's a fine poem in any case... but as to the contest rules...
Use the word "God" 22 times, including the title. I won't reiterate word for word the rules as you can see them above, but the long and short of them are that you can't write the form of the word in any other way than as "God". Not in caps, or plural, not possessive, not as a pronoun or a compound word, or tethered to any other word in any way. It has to stand on its own and be simply, God. No bells, no whistles.
Thirteen times you used the word, God. Nine times you used, God's. Once you used a compound word, God-warned. Once you used a pronoun. That's 24 times, including the title, which is two more than you were allowed as the rules called for exactly 22. (even though really you used 13 plus a bunch that you shouldn't have used.)
So, I guess it's a good thing the contest, whenever it was, is done and over with! Pay attention to all the rules! :)
The poem is good and stands on its own as it is... :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
