God Speaks
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Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Alcreator Litt Dear. I've never seen an acrostic this long and this consistent. Your faith really comes through. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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This was a good read, Alcreator Litt Dear. I've never seen an acrostic this long and this consistent. Your faith really comes through. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from WildWithWords
Interesting effort in a quite restricted format. You definitely have a unique style with intentionally erroneous grammar throughout. Makes me feel a little unhappy about how the rest of us are criticized and occasionally marked down for a single grammatical error (certainly a no-no for any sitting committee) when I read this style. It is what it is, however.
Your evangelistic theme is clearly presented throughout and the messages are loud and clear. I admire your faith in your beliefs.
Just the one thing to contemplate. Twenty-one "gods" in the poem plus one in the title. No problem.... but a twenty-third in the descriptor above the artwork? Is this allowed?
Worth considering again in case it costs you a disqualification from the contest.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Interesting effort in a quite restricted format. You definitely have a unique style with intentionally erroneous grammar throughout. Makes me feel a little unhappy about how the rest of us are criticized and occasionally marked down for a single grammatical error (certainly a no-no for any sitting committee) when I read this style. It is what it is, however.
Your evangelistic theme is clearly presented throughout and the messages are loud and clear. I admire your faith in your beliefs.
Just the one thing to contemplate. Twenty-one "gods" in the poem plus one in the title. No problem.... but a twenty-third in the descriptor above the artwork? Is this allowed?
Worth considering again in case it costs you a disqualification from the contest.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from meeshu
wow, that is an interesting prompt/contest. very creative and the result is a very original form of Acrostic poetry. it is subtly acrostic and blatantly devotional, if that makes sense. great writing, DR. AL.........................meeshu
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wow, that is an interesting prompt/contest. very creative and the result is a very original form of Acrostic poetry. it is subtly acrostic and blatantly devotional, if that makes sense. great writing, DR. AL.........................meeshu
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from Jaye Bennett
That was one doozy of a prompt. Your poem follows the prompt to the letter as far as I can ascertain. A good acrostic poem telling us how we can grow in our knowledge of God. Good picture. Good job.
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That was one doozy of a prompt. Your poem follows the prompt to the letter as far as I can ascertain. A good acrostic poem telling us how we can grow in our knowledge of God. Good picture. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from Raul1
I think that you did this very well. It is very well written. The truths of the world is out there. But, I love God and he loves me. I trust him in his every word. Interesting poem!
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I think that you did this very well. It is very well written. The truths of the world is out there. But, I love God and he loves me. I trust him in his every word. Interesting poem!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
What an interesting poem and a perfect entry for this prompt. You have been very clever in the construction and presentation of this contest poem. Good luck.
Melissa
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What an interesting poem and a perfect entry for this prompt. You have been very clever in the construction and presentation of this contest poem. Good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
