God Speaks
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Quite the long acrostic free verse here. It addresses that universal problem of man's failure to live up to divine expectations, and yet we know we are being taught as we go. Favorite line: Truly, we lived inhumanly, lost lives in wars, caused losses in controversies
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Quite the long acrostic free verse here. It addresses that universal problem of man's failure to live up to divine expectations, and yet we know we are being taught as we go. Favorite line: Truly, we lived inhumanly, lost lives in wars, caused losses in controversies
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, WALK TALK WITH GOD AND GUIDE US LIVING, follows the vertical theme and allows that we must follow God's directions but we may have been given misdirection through biased sources with agendas other than our salvation and the building of God's kingdom on Earth.
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This acrostic poem, WALK TALK WITH GOD AND GUIDE US LIVING, follows the vertical theme and allows that we must follow God's directions but we may have been given misdirection through biased sources with agendas other than our salvation and the building of God's kingdom on Earth.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
Comment from Sandtana Kay
Good content but, difficult to follow. You followed the instructions for the contest very well. God is in everything we do, so we ask Him to help us
learn His word and follow his teachings.
Sandtana Kay
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Good content but, difficult to follow. You followed the instructions for the contest very well. God is in everything we do, so we ask Him to help us
learn His word and follow his teachings.
Sandtana Kay
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
Comment from Alchera
This standard acrostic free verse poem (Talk walk with God and guide us living)
has been perfectly written within its required rules of the ex-contest and well developed throughout its obligatory words use and patiently fixed as the repetitive
Cadence of the narrative storyline content goes on until the end.I did enjoy the whole reading and appreciated the mastodontic work behind it. Bravo!
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This standard acrostic free verse poem (Talk walk with God and guide us living)
has been perfectly written within its required rules of the ex-contest and well developed throughout its obligatory words use and patiently fixed as the repetitive
Cadence of the narrative storyline content goes on until the end.I did enjoy the whole reading and appreciated the mastodontic work behind it. Bravo!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
Totally loved the picture and your commitment to God.
It's inspiring to read and the Word flow together flawlessly.
Hell of an entry and once again love the picture
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Totally loved the picture and your commitment to God.
It's inspiring to read and the Word flow together flawlessly.
Hell of an entry and once again love the picture
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
Go, walk and talk with God, but most importantly, listen to God and follow. This is a very nice acrostic , both in format and in getting across your message.
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Go, walk and talk with God, but most importantly, listen to God and follow. This is a very nice acrostic , both in format and in getting across your message.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of work and the word of God is true. Our God is a powerful God yet a personal simple God. Beautiful presentation and attractive image. You have a good English command. Keep it up!
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Hi, excellent piece of work and the word of God is true. Our God is a powerful God yet a personal simple God. Beautiful presentation and attractive image. You have a good English command. Keep it up!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from samandlancelot
Al,
Sometimes what seems righteous to us, is not righteous to God. If we give to the poor and follow the ten commandments, it is not as powerful if God didn't send us. The power is in our obedience to Him. Reading, reciting, remembering God's Words isn't enough.
I enjoyed your poem.
Patricia
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Al,
Sometimes what seems righteous to us, is not righteous to God. If we give to the poor and follow the ten commandments, it is not as powerful if God didn't send us. The power is in our obedience to Him. Reading, reciting, remembering God's Words isn't enough.
I enjoyed your poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from smileycloud
"Knowledge is not enough; demonstrate, practice living before us"
your Acrostic is lovely
as always very true to form
It is so very clearly an insightful and heartfelt poem
I at first was reminded of the Apocolyptic language of Revelations where the Lord had to keep the message from the Romans but the message in this piece is clear and easily understood
very nice
hey
I do believe you would be more than up to the task of inspiring us with a work in the Apocalyptic language....just a thought
have a smiley day
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"Knowledge is not enough; demonstrate, practice living before us"
your Acrostic is lovely
as always very true to form
It is so very clearly an insightful and heartfelt poem
I at first was reminded of the Apocolyptic language of Revelations where the Lord had to keep the message from the Romans but the message in this piece is clear and easily understood
very nice
hey
I do believe you would be more than up to the task of inspiring us with a work in the Apocalyptic language....just a thought
have a smiley day
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from Badger_29
I'm so happy I cream crosses. Men do doctor, you have a way with words and I'm so happy that you attend your goal in stature and writing, and that although this is how it is when pressure treated and to see you return to the ranks of contributing authors here. Very clever, I like how you move in this together to make it plausible please little and pursuable. A great
Fellowship!
Blessings
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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I'm so happy I cream crosses. Men do doctor, you have a way with words and I'm so happy that you attend your goal in stature and writing, and that although this is how it is when pressure treated and to see you return to the ranks of contributing authors here. Very clever, I like how you move in this together to make it plausible please little and pursuable. A great
Fellowship!
Blessings
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
