Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Rain In The Sky? "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
6 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, wow, this is very powerful. I love how you write of determination to fight any negativity (storms) one faces in life.
'Let your face show some of that lightening' What a terrific phrase. I've been going through some personal turmoil and finally got the backbone to stand up for myself. That's why this poem had so much meaning for me.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Best Wishes, Lou
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Oh, wow, this is very powerful. I love how you write of determination to fight any negativity (storms) one faces in life.
'Let your face show some of that lightening' What a terrific phrase. I've been going through some personal turmoil and finally got the backbone to stand up for myself. That's why this poem had so much meaning for me.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Best Wishes, Lou
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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A very good reading of my sentiments written on that raining stormy day.
Thank you for the review and God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks
Clap your hands, lift your face to the sky, great wording on this poem. Really enjoyed reading your verse, made me smile. Good luck with the contest, have fun with your writing. Verse is an adventure.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Clap your hands, lift your face to the sky, great wording on this poem. Really enjoyed reading your verse, made me smile. Good luck with the contest, have fun with your writing. Verse is an adventure.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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A thunderous applause reference comparison to the weather that day.
Thanks for the review and God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - this was certainly a grand undertaking...thank you for all the time that obviously went into it! :) :) I did have a bit of trouble finding a rhythm throughout the piece both within each stanza and through to the end. Your rhymes and your images were amazing! :) :) Thank you for sharing! :) :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Wow - this was certainly a grand undertaking...thank you for all the time that obviously went into it! :) :) I did have a bit of trouble finding a rhythm throughout the piece both within each stanza and through to the end. Your rhymes and your images were amazing! :) :) Thank you for sharing! :) :)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. This was driven by my thoughts on the weather the day I wrote it more than rhyme and meter.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Your poem is great. It tells us a little about you and what you feel. I wish you the best in the contest! I love rain and I love your artwork. There is something very hopeful in your write and in your bio. I just wish you the best in everything and will keep you in my prayers!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Your poem is great. It tells us a little about you and what you feel. I wish you the best in the contest! I love rain and I love your artwork. There is something very hopeful in your write and in your bio. I just wish you the best in everything and will keep you in my prayers!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and prayers.
God's Blessings to you also.
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Thank you!!
Comment from Reese Turner
Your poem is well written IF your intention was to express your self-imposed guilt over those things which you define as sin. I am no professional in these things, but as a sinner of some record, may I suggest you try writing a poem of the good things you do - the way you reach out, the help you give, the offerings you make. Sometimes we overlook our good works, but generally there are many. God Bless.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Your poem is well written IF your intention was to express your self-imposed guilt over those things which you define as sin. I am no professional in these things, but as a sinner of some record, may I suggest you try writing a poem of the good things you do - the way you reach out, the help you give, the offerings you make. Sometimes we overlook our good works, but generally there are many. God Bless.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review.
This is part of an upcoming book chapter most likely for The Two of Me, which will shed more light on the concept structure.
Please stop by if interested.
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from beencounter
The picture accompanying your poem is fabulous! Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I didn't catch the acrostic until I read the explanation below. The fact that you could do this is amazing. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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The picture accompanying your poem is fabulous! Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I didn't catch the acrostic until I read the explanation below. The fact that you could do this is amazing. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.