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Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Water from the Sky"Eclectic mix
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Comment from Accasej
I appreciated the subject matter however I struggled following the first several lines & felt there could have been more elaboration on the necessity of water.
A nice write though ð???.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I appreciated the subject matter however I struggled following the first several lines & felt there could have been more elaboration on the necessity of water.
A nice write though ð???.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I see you just joined thanks for your harsh rating
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well done Trisha, your raindrop shape poem works well and you've described all the different forms really well and kept the shape perfectly just before it hits the ground. Enjoyed your choice of topic and form,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Well done Trisha, your raindrop shape poem works well and you've described all the different forms really well and kept the shape perfectly just before it hits the ground. Enjoyed your choice of topic and form,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
You have such a sense of style. Your poem, photo, and colors are lovely. Funny that you posted this today. We are in for a deluge in Alabama. The fire department is blowing up rubber rafts to be prepared to go in for water rescues. It is to rain for days--more rain than we get in a month. Whether or not we enjoy it is an ironic line at the moment. Great ending line for the poem though.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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You have such a sense of style. Your poem, photo, and colors are lovely. Funny that you posted this today. We are in for a deluge in Alabama. The fire department is blowing up rubber rafts to be prepared to go in for water rescues. It is to rain for days--more rain than we get in a month. Whether or not we enjoy it is an ironic line at the moment. Great ending line for the poem though.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A special thank you for your compliments
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses fit perfectly with the attached photo and form poem shape written in through out the poem message.
Good Luck in the contest
God's Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses fit perfectly with the attached photo and form poem shape written in through out the poem message.
Good Luck in the contest
God's Blessings to you.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Bucketlist. I really liked the form you used since it went so well with your words. And good use of "whether" at the end. Nice job.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, Bucketlist. I really liked the form you used since it went so well with your words. And good use of "whether" at the end. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the water from the sky that we often need to cool down the earth and air around us and when we need to grow our food that we eat.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem about the water from the sky that we often need to cool down the earth and air around us and when we need to grow our food that we eat.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
What an original poem, shaped like a raindrop. Very nice! Yes, water is essential to survival for everything. When it becomes scarce, that would be scary.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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What an original poem, shaped like a raindrop. Very nice! Yes, water is essential to survival for everything. When it becomes scarce, that would be scary.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanks Damommy for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, so I am totally geeking out over here over this one, Trisha -- absolutely LOVE the shape of the water droplet you have so masterfully crafted with your word choices to complete your free verse offering! ;) ;) My only suggestion would be to look at capitalization some places needed, others not needed....but I love the almost absence of punctuation, think with this type of limited format and formed poem, you could probably lose it altogether which would eliminate any need for capitalization except proper nouns... But that's totally your call, ma'am -- this poem rocks either way!! :) :) My suggestion's like changing the curtains on a beautiful picture window -- so do what you like! ;) :) Thanx for sharing this lovely creation! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Okay, so I am totally geeking out over here over this one, Trisha -- absolutely LOVE the shape of the water droplet you have so masterfully crafted with your word choices to complete your free verse offering! ;) ;) My only suggestion would be to look at capitalization some places needed, others not needed....but I love the almost absence of punctuation, think with this type of limited format and formed poem, you could probably lose it altogether which would eliminate any need for capitalization except proper nouns... But that's totally your call, ma'am -- this poem rocks either way!! :) :) My suggestion's like changing the curtains on a beautiful picture window -- so do what you like! ;) :) Thanx for sharing this lovely creation! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Now you can absolutely love no punctuation. I bet you?re really hard on grading papers! Thanks for the fan mail - next time send a fan male ok!
Thanks for a spiffy review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your write about water and how it quenches life and your poem is in the shape of a water droplet, a clever and very pleasing presentation in praise of water, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I love your write about water and how it quenches life and your poem is in the shape of a water droplet, a clever and very pleasing presentation in praise of water, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Well Hello, Dolly! That was fast Thank you so much for your positive review
Hugs Trisha!
