First Kiss
Sensations that will never come again...13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, First Kiss, has the proper formatting and brings us back to that innocent time when we first kissed that giggly someone we really, really liked. Nice.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This 3-5-3, First Kiss, has the proper formatting and brings us back to that innocent time when we first kissed that giggly someone we really, really liked. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Bill - much appreciated! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from LIJ Red
I am having a bit of a problem making a kiss out in the artwork...no matter, I am artblind anyway. Excellent three five three poem, in my opinion, but short works
slip past me at times...
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I am having a bit of a problem making a kiss out in the artwork...no matter, I am artblind anyway. Excellent three five three poem, in my opinion, but short works
slip past me at times...
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much, LlJ, for stopping in on this one...and, don't worry it's been about 50/50 on folks that pick out the lovers smooching in there! ;) :) Take care, sir, and have a great remainder of the weekend! ;) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the first kiss that will always be on our minds for as long as we live. The impact and reaction to a first kiss is a wonderful feeling.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the first kiss that will always be on our minds for as long as we live. The impact and reaction to a first kiss is a wonderful feeling.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for your read and review, Sandra -- so very appreciated! ;) ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
I guess there's only ever one first kiss,unless, of course, we're talking not about first being kissed, but sharing kisses between two (various) couples. Your poem speaks of innocence to me though,so I think this is the first-ever kiss.:)) S-w-e-e-tly written! Good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I guess there's only ever one first kiss,unless, of course, we're talking not about first being kissed, but sharing kisses between two (various) couples. Your poem speaks of innocence to me though,so I think this is the first-ever kiss.:)) S-w-e-e-tly written! Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Dawn -- it is a rare one for me in the 'romantic' realm, but I like to think of it as more of nostalgia than anything! ;) :) Thanx for the review, ma'am! :) :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Ooh, this is very sensuous. Can almost feel the breath on my skin... great imagery.
Can't quite see the kiss in the artwork, could be in a number of places!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hello :)
Ooh, this is very sensuous. Can almost feel the breath on my skin... great imagery.
Can't quite see the kiss in the artwork, could be in a number of places!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Debra - and so glad you enjoyed! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
Comment from LisaMay
Gosh this took me back several decades! What a well expressed version of a first kiss. Well done. So simply expressed using an original image of hopscotch on goosebumps.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Gosh this took me back several decades! What a well expressed version of a first kiss. Well done. So simply expressed using an original image of hopscotch on goosebumps.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Lisa - and so glad you got a quick trip down memory lane! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
Comment from Jennifer Carr
This is such a great little 3-5-3 poem. I think my favorite part is the hopscotch on goosebumps. I love small little poems :) I like the painting and just now saw the kiss in it
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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This is such a great little 3-5-3 poem. I think my favorite part is the hopscotch on goosebumps. I love small little poems :) I like the painting and just now saw the kiss in it
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Jennifer - always appreciated! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
Comment from l.raven
oh I do remember that first kiss...
was I doing it right...can he tell it's my first...hummm...
love your poem...and love your picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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oh I do remember that first kiss...
was I doing it right...can he tell it's my first...hummm...
love your poem...and love your picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the read and review, beautiful lady - always appreciated! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
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your so very welcome...smiling big...and you have a great Saturday too...love xxoo
Comment from gramag4
What a sweet and tender poem... a very nice presentation! It surely does bring back some lovely images and sensations. A beautiful word picture... thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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What a sweet and tender poem... a very nice presentation! It surely does bring back some lovely images and sensations. A beautiful word picture... thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the read and review, gramag - always appreciated! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
Comment from kiwijenny
I didn't see the kiss in the painting..I saw an epiglottis though and a few nostrils...and something that might have been a kiss..lol
I love the verb hopscotch and goosebumps.yep it describes my first kiss
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I didn't see the kiss in the painting..I saw an epiglottis though and a few nostrils...and something that might have been a kiss..lol
I love the verb hopscotch and goosebumps.yep it describes my first kiss
God bless
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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LOL! You always make an author smile, Kiwi! ;) ;) Thanx so much for the read and review - always appreciated! ;) ;) Take care and have a great Saturday! ;)
