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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about pointing fingers at others we usually forget we point three fingers back to ourselves and we may be quilty of the same thing we accuse others with.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and time to read, comment and rate.
    God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for selecting the perfect picture to reinforce your theme. Your 3-5-3 poses a thought-provoking question. Best wishes in the contest and have a serene Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and your time to read this poem, Good Bless you!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Pointing Fingers, has the proper formatting and invokes the old adage that the guilty know guilt when they see it, because of all their experience.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and for your time to read this entry to the contest.
Comment from Gail Denham
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With what judgment we will be judged. Good point. A poem to chew on, to reflect that we who judge are not any better I guess. Certainly we all have our flaws. Only some we see as more serious. Are they? Hmmm. Good poem for thought

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    We are our best and worst judge's.
    God's Blessings for your Insights and time.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem, Mystery Author. The picture plus your well-chosen words create great imagery. It is something that we all need to remember. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Reminder of my cartoon book reading days. Thank you for the review,
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
Something to think about indeed! Never saw the three fingers pointing back before...
Well presented and perfect syllable count.
Good Luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and Good Luck wishes. God Bless you
Comment from Sugarray77
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Good job on this excellent verse about judgmental attitudes. I like it that you used the old saying about three fingers pointing back... I would also mention that I think your choice of artwork is dramatic and enhances the stringent tone in your verse. Great job and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    The photo reminder seemed and reminds me of a Dick Tracy type of episode hence the message attitude.
    Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from Christine C Autry
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I like the poem. It was really good I thought the artwork was good too. I like these poems that are fun. Good luck in the contest. I appreciate your talent and your hard work thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Thanks for the review and confidence building words.
reply by Christine C Autry on 15-Feb-2019
    You are Welcome.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Oh, I think I remember my mother had a saying when I was a kid, "three fingers are pointing back at you?" I love that you recreated that sentiment into this little 3-5-3. Great word choices with the accusing/accuser. :) Excellent commentary. Great luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and encouragement.
Comment from Sally Law
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Well done and I love the artwork. My mom quoted this to me and I have never forgotten it. A good reminder for us all. The Devil is also referred to as, "the accuser of the brethren."
All my best,
Sally :+)

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and that reminder as well.