Party for Six
a poem6 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Very odd poem compared to your usual fare.. I don't know if you really needed a violence warning on this you don't really describe any thing violent..
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Very odd poem compared to your usual fare.. I don't know if you really needed a violence warning on this you don't really describe any thing violent..
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Some feel murder is a violent act and it?s mention alone qualification for the warning.
Comment from nomi338
That's it, no more parties for me. Especially if the invitation come from someone with the name L, Borgia or T. Bundy or say for instance J. Dahmer. I. Amin or heaven forbid, A. Hitler. Read your invitations carefully and then decide.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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That's it, no more parties for me. Especially if the invitation come from someone with the name L, Borgia or T. Bundy or say for instance J. Dahmer. I. Amin or heaven forbid, A. Hitler. Read your invitations carefully and then decide.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Comment from trimple
OO er...
This has all the ingredients for Mrs. Marple...
Nice rhyming, Bill, and a perfect picture to accompany.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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OO er...
This has all the ingredients for Mrs. Marple...
Nice rhyming, Bill, and a perfect picture to accompany.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Tracey.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
'Come into my parlor said the spider to the flies...' Wow - guess I should have looked closer at the pic there! ;) ;) A very well-presented 'twisted write', Sir Bill - certainly surprised this reader! ;); ) Thanx for sharing! Yvette
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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'Come into my parlor said the spider to the flies...' Wow - guess I should have looked closer at the pic there! ;) ;) A very well-presented 'twisted write', Sir Bill - certainly surprised this reader! ;); ) Thanx for sharing! Yvette
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from judiverse
That very thing happened on an old "Murder She Wrote" episode. From your first stanza, it sounded like the party was off to a promising start. Leaves you wondering what went amiss with all the gore by the end of the evening. Maybe the hostess had planned it. Excellent rhyme. For me, the line might be a bit smoother if you reversed "soon" and "fallen." judi
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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That very thing happened on an old "Murder She Wrote" episode. From your first stanza, it sounded like the party was off to a promising start. Leaves you wondering what went amiss with all the gore by the end of the evening. Maybe the hostess had planned it. Excellent rhyme. For me, the line might be a bit smoother if you reversed "soon" and "fallen." judi
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I see your point, Judi.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Bill Schott. That was quite the party, wasn't it? The piece had a good flow to it and a nice bouncy rhyme scheme. Nice job and I look forward to more.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Bill Schott. That was quite the party, wasn't it? The piece had a good flow to it and a nice bouncy rhyme scheme. Nice job and I look forward to more.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Chas.