Rick, Me, and Ghost Makes Three
A Bump in the Night8 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Hi! You post this as general fiction. Might it have been true? So much of that story is almost identical to the memories I hold of living in an 1800's built farmhouse (as a child) and experiencing the exact same goings on as you described in your story and much more. It was so creepy, but I loved the farm and the old house.
This is a great ghost story. I could vividly picture the child and her bedroom. I could feel the suspense rising as I was reading.
Well done and a great contest entry!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hi! You post this as general fiction. Might it have been true? So much of that story is almost identical to the memories I hold of living in an 1800's built farmhouse (as a child) and experiencing the exact same goings on as you described in your story and much more. It was so creepy, but I loved the farm and the old house.
This is a great ghost story. I could vividly picture the child and her bedroom. I could feel the suspense rising as I was reading.
Well done and a great contest entry!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yes, it was true. Thank you for the review.
:)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Cute story. Now that is a fun ghost story. I wasn't afraid at all. Personally, I believe that things like this happen all of the time. You did a good job of conveying this. It is very believable.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Cute story. Now that is a fun ghost story. I wasn't afraid at all. Personally, I believe that things like this happen all of the time. You did a good job of conveying this. It is very believable.
Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
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Comment from JDRBAR
All were hanging on my wall.
It was in the summer, in the middle of the night, how cliche? (This should be two sentences.)
I did not have a lot of room in my bedroom. It was smallish.
The story is quite cute, but I'm afraid you have numerous redundant statements you would do best to eliminate.
You say your bedroom wall is covered with Rick's posters, then you follow it by saying they were all on the wall.
Again, repetitive. Several sentences are used to say your room is small. One sentence would suffice.
There are similar repeats of a sentence's main thought throughout. Still, I like the premise of the story.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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All were hanging on my wall.
It was in the summer, in the middle of the night, how cliche? (This should be two sentences.)
I did not have a lot of room in my bedroom. It was smallish.
The story is quite cute, but I'm afraid you have numerous redundant statements you would do best to eliminate.
You say your bedroom wall is covered with Rick's posters, then you follow it by saying they were all on the wall.
Again, repetitive. Several sentences are used to say your room is small. One sentence would suffice.
There are similar repeats of a sentence's main thought throughout. Still, I like the premise of the story.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fascinating story and I've never heard of Rick Springfield, so all this was a learning curve for me and I will go and listen to his music now! I enjoyed your ghost story, it is inventive and endearing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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A fascinating story and I've never heard of Rick Springfield, so all this was a learning curve for me and I will go and listen to his music now! I enjoyed your ghost story, it is inventive and endearing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
:)
Comment from kiwijenny
This was well done...and cute. Rick Springfield...was a hottie..I liked Bruce Springsteen better...lol
You kept me interested and intrigued
Good luck with the competition
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This was well done...and cute. Rick Springfield...was a hottie..I liked Bruce Springsteen better...lol
You kept me interested and intrigued
Good luck with the competition
God bless
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
:)
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great spooky story. If you're going to be haunted, it may as well be Rick Springfield. Who can forget Jessie's girl and his other hit whatever it was? This is an excellent contest entry and will do well in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is a great spooky story. If you're going to be haunted, it may as well be Rick Springfield. Who can forget Jessie's girl and his other hit whatever it was? This is an excellent contest entry and will do well in the voting booth.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
:)
Comment from Ben Colder
Chances are your parents were playing a trick. As a father of three firls that would never ne new. LOL. Good write I find no mistakes except when pasting it always leaves known here as evil eddy. Good luck ion the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Chances are your parents were playing a trick. As a father of three firls that would never ne new. LOL. Good write I find no mistakes except when pasting it always leaves known here as evil eddy. Good luck ion the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
I would've loved to have been haunted by Charlie's Angel Farrah Fawcett back in the day, Anonymous Author. Her, or actress Jamie Lee Curtis would've work just fine.
What happened to you does seem odd and what you stated about your father doing renovations on the house makes sense, at least from a paranormal perspective.
Thank goodness you weren't in love with any member of the band from Blue Oyster Cult.
That might've been ugly!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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I would've loved to have been haunted by Charlie's Angel Farrah Fawcett back in the day, Anonymous Author. Her, or actress Jamie Lee Curtis would've work just fine.
What happened to you does seem odd and what you stated about your father doing renovations on the house makes sense, at least from a paranormal perspective.
Thank goodness you weren't in love with any member of the band from Blue Oyster Cult.
That might've been ugly!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you! We will see what happens! :)
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My pleasure. :-)))