Comment from trimple

Excellent

Good evening to you, Gmartine

Thank you for entering my contest and adhering to the rules.

I really enjoyed this. It didn't realise the symbolism of many of these birds you describe.

Your opening lines could work equally well at the end too.

Very nice indeed!

I wish you luck!

kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019

Thank you for the reviews and insightsful words of encouragement.
God's Blessings for Sharing these moments in time.

reply by trimple on 15-Feb-2019

A pleasure. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a very interesting write and I love to hear about birds and their individual personality traits and how they see their purpose in life, a clever write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Thank you for the review and great encouraging words.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Birds are such an important part of our universe. I enjoyed reading about the various attributes they represent.
I did pick up a couple of editorial errors.
Line 4: devine should be divine?
Line 6: represent needs an 's' - represents
Line 7: Roster should be rooster.
Thanks for an interesting read.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019

Noted and will correct, stayed up a bit late and did not thoroughly review it. Greatly Appreciated.