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Life is finding growth where you least expect it...12 total reviews
Comment from elmorose
Beautiful picture, well written poem.The lesson could certainly be applied to living also. The stages of our lives are extreme changes, and we are continually growing.I didn't realize that until I looked back recently and thought of what a different person I was now than thirty years ago.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Beautiful picture, well written poem.The lesson could certainly be applied to living also. The stages of our lives are extreme changes, and we are continually growing.I didn't realize that until I looked back recently and thought of what a different person I was now than thirty years ago.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Oh, I'm so very glad you enjoyed this -- I've always thought that icicles are one of the coolest things about Winter! ;) Thanx for stopping by today -- much appreciated! ;) ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely lesson. Last spring, I took a picture of icicles dripping from a holly bush onto daffodils. I tried unsuccessfully to write a poem about it. Your poem is exactly what I had in mind. I knew that those dripping icicles would freeze again and lengthen again.
You read and wrote my thoughts. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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What a lovely lesson. Last spring, I took a picture of icicles dripping from a holly bush onto daffodils. I tried unsuccessfully to write a poem about it. Your poem is exactly what I had in mind. I knew that those dripping icicles would freeze again and lengthen again.
You read and wrote my thoughts. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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I like writing your thoughts, MQ! ;) ;) LOL! Glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care! :)
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I thought it was yours. That beautiful color option is similar to what you did with the umbrellas. Looks like it is doing well. Mine is unusual. Doing ok.
Comment from sfharper
Fun connection between nature, education and the wisdom received over the ages. Good motivational poem, it uses the 5-7-5 format well. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Fun connection between nature, education and the wisdom received over the ages. Good motivational poem, it uses the 5-7-5 format well. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for your read and review, SF -- icicles are just the COOLEST! :) Have a great weekend! ;)
Comment from l.raven
we just had an ice storm here in Illinois...
I have icicles on everything...my porch is like an ice skating rink...but is magical in beauty...I love your poem...and so love this picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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we just had an ice storm here in Illinois...
I have icicles on everything...my porch is like an ice skating rink...but is magical in beauty...I love your poem...and so love this picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping by, Linda -- so enjoy hearing from you! :) :) Have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
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your so welcome...and you have a wonderful evening as well...love xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the icicles in winter that form in cold conditions and it is always wonderful to see, for the scientist it is a lesson in winter's classroom.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the icicles in winter that form in cold conditions and it is always wonderful to see, for the scientist it is a lesson in winter's classroom.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Sandra! :) :) Thanx for the read and review and have a wonderful evening! ;)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery in line one is effective.
-We can picture the icicles melting,
refreezing, and growing.
-The concluding line has
a good satori like quality.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery in line one is effective.
-We can picture the icicles melting,
refreezing, and growing.
-The concluding line has
a good satori like quality.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Pam! :) :) Thanx for the read and review and have a wonderful evening! ;)
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You are welcome, and have a good evening, too!
Comment from JudyE
Thanks for the explanation about the formation of icicles. I always like learning how some of Nature's wondrous marvels come about. It's a lovely poem.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the explanation about the formation of icicles. I always like learning how some of Nature's wondrous marvels come about. It's a lovely poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Icicles are just plain COOL! :) So glad you enjoyed, Judy! :) :) Thanx for the read and review and have a wonderful evening! ;)
Comment from Raul1
Winter is a beautiful time to enjoy it. This is the reason why we always have Christmas to spend time with friends and family. I like this one line poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Winter is a beautiful time to enjoy it. This is the reason why we always have Christmas to spend time with friends and family. I like this one line poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed, Raul! :) :) Thanx for the read and review and have a wonderful evening! ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the diurnal process of Nature in winter; Nature's life lesson continues, changing extreme cold to warmth; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing; Happy Hug Day! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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This speaks the diurnal process of Nature in winter; Nature's life lesson continues, changing extreme cold to warmth; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing; Happy Hug Day! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the read and review, DR ALCREATOR, and have a wonderful evening! ;)
Comment from Christine C Autry
So pretty and so true. Winter is a real time to learn nature's value. I like your poem very good. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate your hard work and talent.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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So pretty and so true. Winter is a real time to learn nature's value. I like your poem very good. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate your hard work and talent.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Icicles are just plain COOL, Christine! :) Thanx for dropping by this evening! ;) Take care!
