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Poem 5/7/5

4 total reviews 
Comment from sfharper
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I can't quite understand the meaning of florets being grayish, maybe the set seeds? However, it reads well and shows the wonderful effect of color during the winter times. Good use of the 5-7-5 format, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. All syllables are correct to portray a scene of changing seasons. From grey winter days to bright refreshing spring. Good job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from tfawcus
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The contrast between the brightness of the dandelion set against the grey of a wintry day works well to give your 5-75 balance. What a wonderful time of promise and rejuvenation Spring is.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Yes indeed and thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from RodG
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I would actually look forward to seeing dandelions blooming right now. Easy to visualize the contrast between the brightfloret and the grayish winter day. Rod

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Great reveiw zanya