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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Inverted Rainbow Colors?"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
11 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: I adore your conception of a rainbow that you have posted here. It is pretty...it is witty. You worked at this...and now this is working for you. Well done, poet. This is good. And you are good too. Do this again. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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HELLO POET: I adore your conception of a rainbow that you have posted here. It is pretty...it is witty. You worked at this...and now this is working for you. Well done, poet. This is good. And you are good too. Do this again. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and comments, I'm learning more each day from the community here.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
This is an interesting take on the roygbiv theme. The meaning behind the various colors is interesting. I realize the rainbow is a sign from God never to flood the earth again. I didn't realize he was controlling the colors we see? Sounds interesting.
Best wishes to you in the voting booth.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
This is an interesting take on the roygbiv theme. The meaning behind the various colors is interesting. I realize the rainbow is a sign from God never to flood the earth again. I didn't realize he was controlling the colors we see? Sounds interesting.
Best wishes to you in the voting booth.
Joy xx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words.
Just a thought on the colors we see.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the rainbow, its colors and the spiritual meaning of each color to enrich our lives in more than one way. When we see the rainbow in the sky we know God still keeps His promise to mankind.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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A very well-written poem about the rainbow, its colors and the spiritual meaning of each color to enrich our lives in more than one way. When we see the rainbow in the sky we know God still keeps His promise to mankind.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and reading this poem. God's Blessings
Comment from lyenochka
Oh I get it, you took the letters of the rainbow colors and rearranged them and made an acrostic. Great job in giving us a spiritual message to stop and pray and rejoice in God.
One typo:
"Red to stop and Rmember Always this and Prayers are Answered! "
(Remember)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Oh I get it, you took the letters of the rainbow colors and rearranged them and made an acrostic. Great job in giving us a spiritual message to stop and pray and rejoice in God.
One typo:
"Red to stop and Rmember Always this and Prayers are Answered! "
(Remember)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Noted and Thanks for catching my oversight . I will correct it.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love the inverted ROYGBIV ... You have written a really good verse for the Rainbow contest. I love the presentation and artwork that show the colors. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I love the inverted ROYGBIV ... You have written a really good verse for the Rainbow contest. I love the presentation and artwork that show the colors. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words.
I wish you success in all endevears as well, God's Blessings to you.
Comment from l.raven
I have always made a wish when I saw a rainbow...always believe they would come true...I love your poem...I love the wording...wish we had more sixes...******...and love your picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I have always made a wish when I saw a rainbow...always believe they would come true...I love your poem...I love the wording...wish we had more sixes...******...and love your picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and and interesting times as well. God Bless
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An interesting, colorful image.
-Notes are appreciated.
-I like how you use colors
in your poem, and how
each one stands for something.
-I like the image in the first line.
-Yellow is always a good one
for slowing down, and taking
time to reflect.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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-An interesting, colorful image.
-Notes are appreciated.
-I like how you use colors
in your poem, and how
each one stands for something.
-I like the image in the first line.
-Yellow is always a good one
for slowing down, and taking
time to reflect.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words,
Good Luck and God Bless you also.
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You are very welcome, and thank you for your reply.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Rainbow poetry contest. Your chosen artwork shows an entirely different kind of rainbow, but yet it clearly is one.
Thank you for sharing the Bible verses to emphasize your words.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Dear Anonymous Poet,
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Rainbow poetry contest. Your chosen artwork shows an entirely different kind of rainbow, but yet it clearly is one.
Thank you for sharing the Bible verses to emphasize your words.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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If you are interested it came from a shirt picture in The Two of Me.
Thank you for the review It be interesting to hear about any and all the story line reading material I'm writing to collect..
Comment from jmshumate
You did well with this writing prompt. I like how you have each color coordinated with some type of meaning. I think this is your expression of faith and understanding to Gods promise to mankind with the rainbow. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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You did well with this writing prompt. I like how you have each color coordinated with some type of meaning. I think this is your expression of faith and understanding to Gods promise to mankind with the rainbow. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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It absolutely is heartfelt and on mind. Thank you for the review and time for consideration, review and nomination.
Good Luck as well all endevears.
God's Blessings
Comment from Malerie
I like the way you gave life to the colors of the rainbow. I like the line "yellow to slow down and follow our faith. " Too many time we are in such a rush, we don't take time to see the beauty the rainbow.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I like the way you gave life to the colors of the rainbow. I like the line "yellow to slow down and follow our faith. " Too many time we are in such a rush, we don't take time to see the beauty the rainbow.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Glad to Hear that interuputation we all rush to many things in life.
God's Blessings to you!