Feeling Bullied
Contest entry for Emotions6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. Congratulations in placing in the contest with this good poem. People need to just be themselves without fear of intimidation and all of us feel that from others from time to time. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Hi June. Congratulations in placing in the contest with this good poem. People need to just be themselves without fear of intimidation and all of us feel that from others from time to time. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your kind insightful comments.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What an awesome poem!
Overall presentation ... perfection: perfect artwork, perfect font, beautiful colors.
Love the rhyme.
Love the expressive words you used in describing how you were bullied.
Love the hope you give at the end of your poem for those experiencing bullying.
Great contest entry!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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What an awesome poem!
Overall presentation ... perfection: perfect artwork, perfect font, beautiful colors.
Love the rhyme.
Love the expressive words you used in describing how you were bullied.
Love the hope you give at the end of your poem for those experiencing bullying.
Great contest entry!!!!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I think this poem on bullying will resonate with a lot of people. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I had to hit a home run to make it to first base because I'd get so excited and with ADD couldn't often make it to first base without stumbling. I was bullied by many but as I got older it was only some. But they were very mean. Don't we wish we had the wisdom back then that we have now? I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I had to hit a home run to make it to first base because I'd get so excited and with ADD couldn't often make it to first base without stumbling. I was bullied by many but as I got older it was only some. But they were very mean. Don't we wish we had the wisdom back then that we have now? I am voting for this.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I think this poem on bullying will resonate with a lot of people. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Davies
I loved the repetition of "those jeering faces." It really drove your point home. Well-crafted poem. I like the way you turned the tables at the end. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I loved the repetition of "those jeering faces." It really drove your point home. Well-crafted poem. I like the way you turned the tables at the end. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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I think this poem on bullying will resonate with a lot of people. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your choice of artwork
and presentation.
-I like your poem, topic,
and attitude toward it.
-The poem flows well
with good examples and images.
-I also like the progression of
your thoughts-the things that
caused you to be singled out,
like glasses, braces, and sports.
-I also like your repeating line,
and how you vary it at the end.
-The conclusion is good, too.
-You have a strong entry, and
I hope you do well in the contest.
-I look forward to seeing who you are.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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-I like your choice of artwork
and presentation.
-I like your poem, topic,
and attitude toward it.
-The poem flows well
with good examples and images.
-I also like the progression of
your thoughts-the things that
caused you to be singled out,
like glasses, braces, and sports.
-I also like your repeating line,
and how you vary it at the end.
-The conclusion is good, too.
-You have a strong entry, and
I hope you do well in the contest.
-I look forward to seeing who you are.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Melissa Heilig
I love the message of this. It had great flow when reading with the rhyming pattern. This is a topic everyone can relate to at some point in their life.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I love the message of this. It had great flow when reading with the rhyming pattern. This is a topic everyone can relate to at some point in their life.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate it.
