Senses
5-7-5 Contest Entry9 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoaaaa! I LOVE this one!! Excellent entry for this contest. This one stands out for me, big time. Even without the picture--though I do love that picture--it would be a winner. Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Whoaaaa! I LOVE this one!! Excellent entry for this contest. This one stands out for me, big time. Even without the picture--though I do love that picture--it would be a winner. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Rachelle thank you so much for this killer review! Much appreciated! Lynda
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Ah! A midnight hunter on the prowl. I love your use of the word "moonrise" and your 5-7-5 is nicely constructed. This is a solid contest entry. I'm partial to big cats. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Ah! A midnight hunter on the prowl. I love your use of the word "moonrise" and your 5-7-5 is nicely constructed. This is a solid contest entry. I'm partial to big cats. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you Cindy! Much appreciated. I like big cats too.
Comment from LisaMay
This should be a strong contest entry. Good luck! It has drama with all senses alert, triggered by the moonrise and hunting opportunities. Nice last line alliteration.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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This should be a strong contest entry. Good luck! It has drama with all senses alert, triggered by the moonrise and hunting opportunities. Nice last line alliteration.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for these awesome comments! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Mostly... You get it! Lol! Yep nighttime hunt! Thank you again!
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I voted for it... I see you are leading so far!!
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Thank you so much for these awesome comments! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Mostly... You get it! Lol! Yep nighttime hunt! Thank you again!
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Thank you! I appreciate it soooo much!
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow, fantastic write for this contest, author. This can be taken numerous ways and makes the reader ponder their own imagination. The panther picture is a perfect fit. Thank you for jumping in my little contest with this great piece. Sure to be a top contender. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Excellent write.
DS
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow, fantastic write for this contest, author. This can be taken numerous ways and makes the reader ponder their own imagination. The panther picture is a perfect fit. Thank you for jumping in my little contest with this great piece. Sure to be a top contender. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Excellent write.
DS
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow! High praise from the creator of this contest. I thank you for this awesome review of my entry. Your comments are much appreciated. Thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
You have done a good job in presenting a very dramatic poem for the .. After Midnight 5-7-5 prompt. When you used the term... enhancing the hunt... it kicked it up to spooooky... Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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You have done a good job in presenting a very dramatic poem for the .. After Midnight 5-7-5 prompt. When you used the term... enhancing the hunt... it kicked it up to spooooky... Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Ha! Loved these comments. Thanks for your time and this review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - now there's an offering that certainly gets the senses reeling with all of the possibilities here -- thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Wow - now there's an offering that certainly gets the senses reeling with all of the possibilities here -- thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thanks! Appreciate your time to read and review this very much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like how you've used this beautiful nocturnal hunter to describe many messages that you convey here. Many kinds of prey are hunted after dark. Some of them have two legs instead of four, and they also hunt. I enjoyed this along with the beautiful spot on artwork. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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I like how you've used this beautiful nocturnal hunter to describe many messages that you convey here. Many kinds of prey are hunted after dark. Some of them have two legs instead of four, and they also hunt. I enjoyed this along with the beautiful spot on artwork. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Two legged ones... Lol. Thanks so much for this awesome review. Much appreciated!
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
You've chosen your words carefully to come up with a descriptive 5-7-5 poem that tells a story. The thought that a predatory animal's senses come alive after midnight is scary but true. Best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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You've chosen your words carefully to come up with a descriptive 5-7-5 poem that tells a story. The thought that a predatory animal's senses come alive after midnight is scary but true. Best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Wow! Thanks for great review. Really appreciate you taking the time to do this.
Comment from moonsunrise
What a great 5-7-5 poem entry. The artwork you selected, even though very scary, is quite beautiful. I'm just glad that I am not venturing there.
Best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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What a great 5-7-5 poem entry. The artwork you selected, even though very scary, is quite beautiful. I'm just glad that I am not venturing there.
Best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review! I appreciate you taking the time to read this and comment. Really appreciate it.