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Unsaid, Undone

5-7-5 after midnight

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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This is the insomniac's mantra, isn't it?! Cool picture to accompany it - a tortured-looking, ethereal beauty. Well done! I hope you have success in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
This is a really good entry for the contest.
Totally relatable - things I haven't done that I need to do and things I need to say and haven't yet, play on my mind and make it so I can't sleep - definitely haunting!
Good luck in the voting booth!
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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I really like the unrest of emotion your little 5-7-5 evokes. It's true that we toss and turn when we leave words and deeds unsaid/undone. Nicely written. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from meeshu
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Your writing is smooth and has such a poignant point to make. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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And sometimes they haunt far beyond that, yeah? :) ;) Thank you for this awesome offering for this contest -- best of luck to you at the polls! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from 24chas
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I really enjoyed this piece, unknown poet. I think you really captured the spirit of after midnight with this one. The artwork really worked as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

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    We do tend to keep ourselves awake at night with all kind of regrets - thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from RodG
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This 5-7-5 describes a situation for many who find midnight to be the "darkest hour" because of what was said or not done earlier. As a result, your Speaker is having a sleepless night. Rod

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

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    Thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from DragonSkulls
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What an excellent offering to the contest, author. Thank you jumping in my little prompt. I love the picture you added with your poetic words. I wish you the best of luck in the booth with this great write.

DS

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to read and share your insights. So glad it resonated with you.