Beneath These Words
13 Syllable contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
If I had a six-star, you would be getting a six-star. I'm so sorry I don't have one :(
Overall presentation ... pure perfection.
So much truth in just 13 syllables. Your words had me pondering, 'which way do I go?'. Maybe, I'll just do it both ways. The mask writing sounds intriguing. Very thought-provoking.
This poem is a sure-fire winner :)
Gale
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
  |
If I had a six-star, you would be getting a six-star. I'm so sorry I don't have one :(
Overall presentation ... pure perfection.
So much truth in just 13 syllables. Your words had me pondering, 'which way do I go?'. Maybe, I'll just do it both ways. The mask writing sounds intriguing. Very thought-provoking.
This poem is a sure-fire winner :)
Gale
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
-
Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the six offer, Gale. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. That's how I like to go with it, sometimes hiding behind a mask, sometimes adding a little truth in there, Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from trimple
Oo! This is deep, Ron. Very thoughtful write and engages your reader to wonder who that is behind the facade... :)
Smashing pic too!
Good luck buddy
much love
tracey
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
|
Oo! This is deep, Ron. Very thoughtful write and engages your reader to wonder who that is behind the facade... :)
Smashing pic too!
Good luck buddy
much love
tracey
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
-
Thank you so much for the great review, Tracey. Yeah, I'm a stickler for having the perfect pic to go with my words. I came across this one and just had to use it. I really appreciate the gracious stars, T. I'm glad you liked it.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
Wow!! What an outstanding statement this is poet. And you did it in thirteen syllable. I'm thinking you may have some talent. Art is perfect for this post. And you literally knocked out the hidden personae many of us camp out in. This is VERY well crafted and I think you have a winner here. Good luck in your contest. Well done!!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
 |
Wow!! What an outstanding statement this is poet. And you did it in thirteen syllable. I'm thinking you may have some talent. Art is perfect for this post. And you literally knocked out the hidden personae many of us camp out in. This is VERY well crafted and I think you have a winner here. Good luck in your contest. Well done!!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
-
Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Lynda. I lucked out when I came across this picture. I just had to use it. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words, Lynda. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Wonderful use of the thirteen syllables to tell on yourself. Yes, it is true that some poets use their poetry to find or tell the truth. It is quite interesting that you feel your poetry is a mask.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
|
Dear Anonymous Poet,
Wonderful use of the thirteen syllables to tell on yourself. Yes, it is true that some poets use their poetry to find or tell the truth. It is quite interesting that you feel your poetry is a mask.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
-
Thank you for the fantastic review, Mustang Patty. Yeah, there's not much of the 'real' me on this site. Lol. Sometimes a little true life pours on to the pages, but not too often. I really appreciate the gracious stars, MP. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from victor 66
You've written thirteen words into four lines that are most interesting to read. Somebody once said that, "Everybody has three faces, three masks if you will; one they show to the public, one that is private and one that is secret." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
|
You've written thirteen words into four lines that are most interesting to read. Somebody once said that, "Everybody has three faces, three masks if you will; one they show to the public, one that is private and one that is secret." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
-
That sounds like a good theory to me, lol. Thank you for the great review, Victor. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
-
You are most welcome.
Comment from Jennie Phelps
Oh you did a wonderful job in getting a point across with only 13 syllables.
And it makes me wonder how many writers use a mask, instead of their truths? Thought provoking,...I like that...and not easy to do in so few words. Congratulations! ð???
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
|
Oh you did a wonderful job in getting a point across with only 13 syllables.
And it makes me wonder how many writers use a mask, instead of their truths? Thought provoking,...I like that...and not easy to do in so few words. Congratulations! ð???
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
-
Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Jennie. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
