Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I remember that from childhood! it was the coolest thing, Ever. up to that point, anyway. great write and I wish you well in the prompt/contest..

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019

Soooo....what's the coolest thing now...?? :) LOL! :) Thanks so much for reviewing, dude -- have a wonderful day! :)

reply by meeshu on 06-Feb-2019

bacon.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi,

What a delightful poem! And a creative way to entertain the younger folks while teaching some hands-on science.

Your verbiage beings your readers into the experience. As I read this, I feel the cold, see the wonder in the children's eyes, and hear the bubble shattering.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reviewing, HM -- have a wonderful day! :)

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I love what you've done with the presentation here: a black background, different colored text, an illustration which is attractive and relevant. And let's not forget informative author's notes, which I love to read when reviewing. I have counted your syllables and they seem correct for the criteria listed. Good luck with your contest entry!

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reviewing, KyColonel -- have a wonderful day! :)