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Our Friend Michael Cahill

Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Dear Friend Passed"
Prose or Poetry

19 total reviews 
Comment from JudyE
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When I think of death I think of the person being freed of pain, trouble and the cares of the world. You have expressed your thoughts well in verse. A lovely poem.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much :))
    Carol
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Carol. Did you know him? I did not, but I wrote a poem for him anyway and know he was highly thought of by the members of the site. Gob bless him. A nicely composed poem in the style you created. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
    I did know him, mostly when I was doing the Potlatch poems. He was an amazing man, I was shocked to hear of his death. I will check out your poem :)
    Carol
Comment from misscookie
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I don't believe I had the pleasure to exchange words with him
due to my memory I forget things
Yet everyone has post their great lost of him
how bless you were to have met a rare bird like him.
Cookie

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much,
    Carol
reply by misscookie on 09-Feb-2019
    my pleasure
    Cookie
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing this splendid tribute to Michael Cahill. I did not know he was ill but was grateful that he was recognized in January as Poet of the Month. His "gifted soul...will ever shine". Warm regards- Joan

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
    I didn?t know either, it was a shock to hear of his passing.
    Carol
Comment from Treischel
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That Latin phrase gives this tribute to our dear FanStory friend, Michael Cahill, the weight of solemn dignity. The choice if the Sapphonic Triad was a perfect platform on which to express your sentiments. I was deeply touched.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much, I love that particular phrase and agree that the Latin language gives gravitas to the sentiment - I very much appreciate your kind review,
    Carol
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Carol.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A good quote to begin; I
like the fact it is in Latin.
-Words are so hard in a
difficult situation, but
you expressed your
heartfelt feelings in
a way that Michael would
certainly appreciate and relate to.
-Thanks for sharing; he will be missed.



 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    The psalms are often a good place to look for comfort or inspiration...thanks, Pam,
    Carol
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Feb-2019
    You are welcome, Carol, and I agree with your thought about the Psalms.
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Carol,
A most beautiful Triad for Michael.
As busy as Michael always appeared to be, I'm sure he's earned his rest.
He'll be a star in the heavens as well as on the pages of Fanstory.
I like to think of him conversing with all the poets and musicians of the past.
Wonderful epitaph.
Robert





 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Oh Robert...to think of him conversing with poets and story tellers of the past, I can picture him conversing with Joyce and Wordsworth now. Thank you, I pray that this could be true :)
    Carol
Comment from Mark Valentine
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A nice addition to the collection. Unfortunately, I never got to know Michael very well, but I did read enough of him to know he was extremely talented - and obviously extremely popular on Fanstory. Your elegant poem and sentiments seem an appropriate homage - I'm guessing he is pleased as he assumes his place in the firmament.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    With God's grace, maybe one day we will all be there, conversing from amongst our places in the firmament - now that would be heaven :)))
Comment from country ranch writer
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He is in God's hands now and is kicking back with all the great legends of all times. He was a great friend and mentor and a very gentle man he cared for one and all. Helping when he could. May he rest in peace

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thank you, I so appreciate your gentle words :))
    Carol
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Carol,

Thank you for sharing your farewell wishes to Michael. I like the idea of him having a well-deserved rest, too. He was a true and faithful servant during his time here with us.

May we all keep him and his spirit in our hearts and be kind to one another,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thank you, yes, kindness, and tolerance, are gifts that are most important...
    Carol