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Our Friend Michael Cahill

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Dear Mike"
Prose or Poetry

17 total reviews 
Comment from alf collier
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Oh, my friend, this is a wonderful tribute to a poet who gave of himself more than he received!! He was a great mentor, though I have no doubt he shielded much of his interaction with others, as he did with me. Great stuff here!!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
    Yes Mike was a very generous poet and with the start of both the Potlatch Club and the Free Versers, he really challenged us to become better writers, and to enjoy our writing. Thanks for reading my free verse tribute, I felt, for me, that was the appropriate form to say thanks.
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Written from the heart, and written so well, Valda. It's always sad when a fellow poet passes away; and Mikey clearly meant a lot to a lot of writers. He and I didn't cross paths much, so I didn't really know him, but I know that he was very well liked on Fanstory. "And at times you pushed the boundaries" ... I love that you made mention of this, because he never held anything back with his writes.

Very nice, Valda!

Hugs,
Connie

Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
    Yes, I felt I had to put that in because that was part of him, he spoke up when he thought it was needed, and he was a very generous spirit. Thanks Connie for reading and for your comments on this one, most appreciated,
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from Bill Schott
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This was a very nice eulogy for Michael Cahill, who was a popular and important member of the Fanstory site. His movements within the site have helped create and popularize many clubs to become niche meeting places for varied contributors.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks Bill, he certainly was all of that and will be missed. Thanks for reading my tribute to mike,
    much appreciated,
    cheers
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is truly a delight to read, Valda. You captured much of the "essence" of Mike's generous spirit and what a wonderful free verse tribute to his memorial.

Really enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks Gloria, much appreciated.
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from BOO ghost
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Very nice dedication. Mikey was one of a kind.

He will be remembered. He looks down on us as he plays his music.

Lovely presentation. Hard to find words. I am momentary sailing in the doldrums through the strait of Gibraltar with no wind to my mizzen, lugsails and jiggers.

Thanks for your dedication!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Many thanks BOO ghost, much appreciated,
    cheers.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Valda. I was off the site for a few days and very sad to hear of Michael's passing. I didn't really know him, but others have always spoke well of his generosity. God bless him. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    I was shocked to see the news, and for me, a free verse was the way to go re he setup the Free Versers Club and
    I love that form. Thanks for reading Marilyn, really appreciated
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from seaglass
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This is a thoughtful tribute to an old friend who held a piece of each of our hearts. I am so sad to learn of this news. May he be aways remembered by those who knew him

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reading seaglass, he certainly touched all of us and will be remembered
    cheers.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written free verse poem and tribute to Mikey, a poet friend we all honored and love in the way he interact with all of us, he will be dearly missed, his place is now empty.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reading Sandra, he will certainly be missed by us all.
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from Joy Graham
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Well said, my friend :) I'm sure he is smiling at you right now. He touched us all with his encouragement to try writing in so many different styles. I remember when I tried the dreaded palindrone poetry and then came in second place on the site contest. His comment of congratulations stands out so much to me. He said somethig like, "and I thought you didn't like palindrone poetry". I was speechless about it all. I only tried it because he said I should. Your writing grows because of his encouragement. Keep going with that. You are doing great.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thanks Joy for reading and sharing your memories with me, he is certainly going to be missed
    cheers,
    valda
Comment from damommy
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What a lovely tribute. I know his family will treasure these thoughts. Thank you for participating. I like that you used the Eternal Flame for your photo.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thanks Yvonne. I felt I needed to do a free verse in tribute to mike and this book gives us all
    the opportunity to share our thoughts, thanks for that.
    sheers,
    valda