Chattahoochee Mental Hospital
Looks Are Deceiving...55 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. it is an interesting approach to describing these warehouses. so vivid. Excellent verse and verbiage Well done and good luck in the contest..
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This is a very fine piece of writing. It has a wonderful cadence and pace. it is an interesting approach to describing these warehouses. so vivid. Excellent verse and verbiage Well done and good luck in the contest..
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This reminds me of " One flew Over the Coocoo's Nest", the movie. Captivating read, tells the story as it is felt and with stark honesty. The "found" to me is a kind of vision, perhaps a spiritual experience. Or is it? (sorry the notes were too long, read only a part)
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This reminds me of " One flew Over the Coocoo's Nest", the movie. Captivating read, tells the story as it is felt and with stark honesty. The "found" to me is a kind of vision, perhaps a spiritual experience. Or is it? (sorry the notes were too long, read only a part)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - now this is certainly a unique approach to this contest -- and so very well done -- your author notes even take the 'hauntingness' to another level! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Should do well! ;)
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Wow - now this is certainly a unique approach to this contest -- and so very well done -- your author notes even take the 'hauntingness' to another level! :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Should do well! ;)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
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Comment from Miranda Langston
ye gods. this is soooo sad. that ending almost made me cry and this hits home with me for a reason... very grateful, especially after reading this, that i am free from something like that
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ye gods. this is soooo sad. that ending almost made me cry and this hits home with me for a reason... very grateful, especially after reading this, that i am free from something like that
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow. The poem itself stands alone as absolutely exceptional. I experienced every sensation you created and was downright despondent at the end. When I saw the photo, a chill washed over me, and when I read the history you provided, it enhanced my feelings that much more. What an EXCELLENT read!!
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Wow. The poem itself stands alone as absolutely exceptional. I experienced every sensation you created and was downright despondent at the end. When I saw the photo, a chill washed over me, and when I read the history you provided, it enhanced my feelings that much more. What an EXCELLENT read!!
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
