In Eternity's Grasp
Know that time is truly on your side...15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write but of course we can never reach the future, the past soon leaves us and all there is left is the present. Time, man's invention has fascinated us for centuries, a clever and thought provoking write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A clever write but of course we can never reach the future, the past soon leaves us and all there is left is the present. Time, man's invention has fascinated us for centuries, a clever and thought provoking write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review of my poem. ;) ;) Have a great evening!
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Your naani poem presents a unique vision of time. The word picture you created of time with tendrils that hold onto the past, present and future is very unique. You should do well in the contest. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Your naani poem presents a unique vision of time. The word picture you created of time with tendrils that hold onto the past, present and future is very unique. You should do well in the contest. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review and your wonderful comments! ;) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, good presentation and attractive piece of work. It's a motivating piece since many times we thing that time is not on our side and we make a lot of mistakes when we panick. All the best.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hi, good presentation and attractive piece of work. It's a motivating piece since many times we thing that time is not on our side and we make a lot of mistakes when we panick. All the best.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;)
Comment from pome lover
hmmm
I have read that several times and am still not sure I understand it; I read your explanation of it, above, but, I think it's the word tendrils that puzzles me.
sorry if I'm being picky; it certainly sounds intellectual and deep, but it is alluding me, though it's very meaningful (smile), if I could just get the meaning. I mean I understand your words, just not the "how" of it, I guess.
Never-the-less it sounds good! :)
pome lover
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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hmmm
I have read that several times and am still not sure I understand it; I read your explanation of it, above, but, I think it's the word tendrils that puzzles me.
sorry if I'm being picky; it certainly sounds intellectual and deep, but it is alluding me, though it's very meaningful (smile), if I could just get the meaning. I mean I understand your words, just not the "how" of it, I guess.
Never-the-less it sounds good! :)
pome lover
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Glad it at least sounded good -- thank you for the review! :)
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I apologize for my thick-headedness
Comment from 24chas
Nice job on this piece. Your words matched the artwork to perfection. Like the way it was presented and the message within the work. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Nice job on this piece. Your words matched the artwork to perfection. Like the way it was presented and the message within the work. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review and wonderful comments! :)
