In Eternity's Grasp
Know that time is truly on your side...15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, In Eternity's Grasp, uses four lines and twenty-four syllables to show the reader the close connection that the past, present, and future have on us.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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This naani, In Eternity's Grasp, uses four lines and twenty-four syllables to show the reader the close connection that the past, present, and future have on us.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the review, Bill! :) :) Yvette
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Brilliantly beautiful! Overall presentation gorgeous. Font colors expertly blended with the artwork colors.
I loved 'tendrils of time'. This part sparked the message that followed: 'Know that time is truly on your side...In Eternity's Grasp'. That was clever!
What a great Naani and contest entry!!!
Wishing you the very best :)
Gale
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Brilliantly beautiful! Overall presentation gorgeous. Font colors expertly blended with the artwork colors.
I loved 'tendrils of time'. This part sparked the message that followed: 'Know that time is truly on your side...In Eternity's Grasp'. That was clever!
What a great Naani and contest entry!!!
Wishing you the very best :)
Gale
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, Gale - much appreciated! :) ;)
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My pleasure :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a powerful little message...the passage of time! I love the connects to the past, present, and future in such a poetic way. A nicely formatted Naani poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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What a powerful little message...the passage of time! I love the connects to the past, present, and future in such a poetic way. A nicely formatted Naani poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review of my contest entry. :) Have a good evening! :)
Comment from Sugarray77
A very wise and accurate verse, Yvette. I enjoyed reading it and think, also, that your color coding reminds me of the intro to that Star Wars movie that scrolls across the screen.. Great writing, as always!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A very wise and accurate verse, Yvette. I enjoyed reading it and think, also, that your color coding reminds me of the intro to that Star Wars movie that scrolls across the screen.. Great writing, as always!!
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed, Melissa - thanx so much for the positive review! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Scarbrems
Hmm, very deep. Lovely alliteration - 'tendrils of time' - and isn't tendrils a fabulous word! I enjoyed this, hope it does as well as it deserves in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Hmm, very deep. Lovely alliteration - 'tendrils of time' - and isn't tendrils a fabulous word! I enjoyed this, hope it does as well as it deserves in the contest
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your lovely comments and for the time in doing the read and review -- much appreciated! :) ;)
Comment from victor 66
I can't argue about your Naani writing prompt entry. It's quite well done. You have a "formula" within your words that should be adhered to, but I fear it is not. We don't seem to learn from the past and we seem to make the same mistakes over. My hope for the future is some what minimal. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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I can't argue about your Naani writing prompt entry. It's quite well done. You have a "formula" within your words that should be adhered to, but I fear it is not. We don't seem to learn from the past and we seem to make the same mistakes over. My hope for the future is some what minimal. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review and engaging comments, victor ... I am truly glad that my writing touched you. :) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
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As always, you are most welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani poem. Our past good or bad is the anchor to let the present transend to the future, it depends on us to let go of the bad and make the good better.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Naani poem. Our past good or bad is the anchor to let the present transend to the future, it depends on us to let go of the bad and make the good better.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the read and review, Sandra! :) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Geez Louise, you are like another poet I love to read -- I could easily spend every six I have on what you write -- the first six pieces!!! What a wonderful naani! It's going onto my bookshelf too. I will want to read this one again and again!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Geez Louise, you are like another poet I love to read -- I could easily spend every six I have on what you write -- the first six pieces!!! What a wonderful naani! It's going onto my bookshelf too. I will want to read this one again and again!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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So glad you liked this one too -- and it's good to have you rummaging around in my closet...kinda that warm feeling that I'm not alone - LOL! :) ;) You and Miss Priss stay warm up there! :) ;)
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It was a BEEE_UUU_tiful day. +6 C. :)) +8 predicted for tomorrow,so after all those bitterly cold days, you wanna believe I won't be staying indoors. :) I had cabin fever!!!!!!! lol
Comment from Cycler
Very well presented and great concept. Whether the image inspired you or your words inspired the image that was chosen, they complement each other very nicely to form an intriguing work of art. Nicely done
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Very well presented and great concept. Whether the image inspired you or your words inspired the image that was chosen, they complement each other very nicely to form an intriguing work of art. Nicely done
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Actually had trouble finding an image that would match the crazy thing --lol!! ;) :) Thank you for those wonderful stars, Cycler - so glad you enjoyed! ;) Thank you for the review and have a great evening! ;) ;)
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, 'time anchored in the present'. that's very good..
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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You have created some great images here, Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, 'time anchored in the present'. that's very good..
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, dude - good of you to stop by this evening! ;) ;)
