The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Always Remember"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from trimple
Good evening to you, Gmartine
Your Acrostic poem is poignant and nicely written.
Never forget-God forgives all but humans are less able to forgive and forget.
Good luck in the contest
kind regards
trimple
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
Good evening to you, Gmartine
Your Acrostic poem is poignant and nicely written.
Never forget-God forgives all but humans are less able to forgive and forget.
Good luck in the contest
kind regards
trimple
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review, insight, and Good Luck wishes.
God Bless
Comment from patcelaw
May we never forget what the Lord has done for us and how He has worked in our lives to make us the people we are today. I dare say that without Him my life would be a total mess. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
May we never forget what the Lord has done for us and how He has worked in our lives to make us the people we are today. I dare say that without Him my life would be a total mess. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Amen,
That men of power tend to Repeat history over time is my conceptual concern.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this entry in the acrostic poetry contest. I have seen another poem with this theme and illustration already today; it seems to be on the collective consciousness. Your point is clear and your first letters do spell out a word (two actually). Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
Thank you for sharing this entry in the acrostic poetry contest. I have seen another poem with this theme and illustration already today; it seems to be on the collective consciousness. Your point is clear and your first letters do spell out a word (two actually). Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and insight,
If you don't mind can you reveal the name of the similar poem I'd like to read it.
Yes on the two words, I hope that is allowed in the contest.
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I believe the similar poem was called "ReManifesting Destiny."
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It's also one of my works.
Thanks for responding.
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I review with blinders on, so a lot of times I can't tell for sure.
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Thank you I was curious as I am a George.