Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "In Sanity?"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. I believe "it's" should have an apostrophe in this case because you are using it as a contraction. Your illustration is appropriately eye-catching, and your syllable count is as stated. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you for sharing. I believe "it's" should have an apostrophe in this case because you are using it as a contraction. Your illustration is appropriately eye-catching, and your syllable count is as stated. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words
I will review and revise based on your note
Comment from Kathleen S.
On wow, the picture is funny and speaks volumes, but oh so perfect for your poetry. You speak volumes in such few words. This could apply to more than one theme. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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On wow, the picture is funny and speaks volumes, but oh so perfect for your poetry. You speak volumes in such few words. This could apply to more than one theme. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Just revised you'll Please review and advise. Thank you for the review and insight