Comment from Tootie

Excellent

I wish I had a six left. This was awesome! It was so well-written, witty and unique. I wish you the very best in the contest. It's a winner by my book! Blessings, Cathy

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my lipogram! It was a fun challenge.

Comment from Christine C Autry

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this. It was truly fun. Made me smile. Also it was a good poem. Thank You for sharing this. I appreciate your work. Keep up the good writing.

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my lipogram! It was a fun challenge.

Comment from jmshumate

Exceptional

This is an interesting format. It has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it, with a humorous little story being told. I think this is an excellent contest entry. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my lipogram! It was a fun challenge. And I appreciate the generous rating!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, I like this revised tale, instead of simple Simon says, it relates that Simon that simons word is being ignored, very well done and best wishes for your contest, I love the artwork****kahpot

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my lipogram! It was a fun challenge.