Across a Crowded Room
There are no words necessary...19 total reviews
Comment from gramag4
This is a beautifully written piece.. it brings the senses to life and share the experience. It made me smile! The picture is a perfect compliment. Congratulations on your WIN!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is a beautifully written piece.. it brings the senses to life and share the experience. It made me smile! The picture is a perfect compliment. Congratulations on your WIN!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for dropping by, gramag -- I am so very glad this one made you smile!! :) ;) Thanx also for the congrats -- be sure to stop by any time....I'll be sure to have an iced tea waiting for ya! :) ;) Take care and have a great weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Across a Crowed Room, has the right set up and says a lot about that certain look which captures the heart....
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This 2-5-2, Across a Crowed Room, has the right set up and says a lot about that certain look which captures the heart....
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Bill! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem. Sometimes only a glimpse of a person can attract our attention and we know that person is meant to be in our lives. Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 2-5-2 poem. Sometimes only a glimpse of a person can attract our attention and we know that person is meant to be in our lives. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for the read and review, Sandra -- I do so appreciate your taking the time to do so!! :) Have a great weekend! :) Yvette :)
Comment from meeshu
I had to go fishing for this one, it is really good. so cool that you won and I didn't even get to vote. I've been 'out of sequence', lately. if you would like to E-Mail our address, I would love to send you a book. enjoy your weekend, Yvette.....................gary
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I had to go fishing for this one, it is really good. so cool that you won and I didn't even get to vote. I've been 'out of sequence', lately. if you would like to E-Mail our address, I would love to send you a book. enjoy your weekend, Yvette.....................gary
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thanx for going through the closet, dude -- appreciate it! :) ;) And I was going to email you when I got home about that exact thing....are you psychic or something...? I was sitting in the doctor's office for David (flu and pneumonia - poor baby! Not a happy camper...) and, after I did your review (Gosh! Doing those things on your cell phone is excruciating but it passes the time and prevents germy people from trying to talk to you when you look busy!!), I pulled up my Amazon app to order myself a copy and it wasn't there. I was bummed. So, Yes! Of course!! I would love for you to send me a copy - I'll click over there and send my address shortly!! :) ;) Oh, and you have to let me know where I can tell others they can buy one (or I can buy one or more for gifts!) as well. :) ;) ;) Take care of yourself, dude, and get back in sequence! :) ;) LOL! :) ;) MD
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working out the kinks with IngramSpark for distribution. and building a website (escapethedin.com). I spent 10 days in hospital for the big Pn. they drilled a hole in my side and I got to carry a plastic 'suitcase' full of blood and puss through the place to go smoke. it was clear plastic, so it was very enjoyable for everyone. hope David doesn't have it that bad. take care of YOU and David.............g&c.
Comment from victor 66
Congratulations on a well deserved win. I did enter this contest and received a second place. Your entry was obviously superior and I will keep your poem as example for future reference, if you don't mind. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Congratulations on a well deserved win. I did enter this contest and received a second place. Your entry was obviously superior and I will keep your poem as example for future reference, if you don't mind. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Wow, Victor -- that is certainly high praise!! :) ;) Thank you for that acknowledgement as I am both honored and humbled...your work is always awesome! :) :) And, please, feel free to hold on to it for future reference ... it would be my pleasure! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! :) Yvette :)
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You're welcome as well as a thank you for your very nice reply. Take care, Yvette.
Comment from Liberty Justice
What a lovely photo that speaks with the eyes as she looks at someone she likes. You paint this poem with such a romantic and seductive manner and the colors flow with richness and joy. WELL WRITTEN. Read my writings, also. Good luck contest and you certainly have my thumbs up. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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What a lovely photo that speaks with the eyes as she looks at someone she likes. You paint this poem with such a romantic and seductive manner and the colors flow with richness and joy. WELL WRITTEN. Read my writings, also. Good luck contest and you certainly have my thumbs up. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your review and your lovely comments, Liberty -- may you have a wonderful evening! :) :)
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After contest ends please tell me who you are. liberty justice
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like this entry for the contest, Yvette. The meaning and the presentation you gave is perfect and draws te reader into this simple verse. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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I really like this entry for the contest, Yvette. The meaning and the presentation you gave is perfect and draws te reader into this simple verse. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thanx, Melissa -- how'd you know it was me? :) :) I'm so glad you enjoyed! :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is a wonderful contest entry! Love the photo you chose to illustrate your 2-5-2.
In 9 syllables, you clearly made a statement, a clever one at that.
I keep re-reading because I think it is such a brilliant write:
... a gaze that whispers
... silently whispers
... gaze whispering name across a crowded room
Yes, I LOVE THIS!
Gale
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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This is a wonderful contest entry! Love the photo you chose to illustrate your 2-5-2.
In 9 syllables, you clearly made a statement, a clever one at that.
I keep re-reading because I think it is such a brilliant write:
... a gaze that whispers
... silently whispers
... gaze whispering name across a crowded room
Yes, I LOVE THIS!
Gale
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your review and your lovely comments, Gale -- may you have a wonderful evening! :) :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A very nice 2-5-2. Stunning visual and your words match the sentiment. Well-written and nicely formatted to the contest. Great entry. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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A very nice 2-5-2. Stunning visual and your words match the sentiment. Well-written and nicely formatted to the contest. Great entry. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read and review, Cindy -- so glad you enjoyed my sultry entry here! ;) Have a great evening! :) ;)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I like this a lot! So sensual...
Sometimes a look is all it takes to get the message over.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Hello :)
I like this a lot! So sensual...
Sometimes a look is all it takes to get the message over.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the read and review, Debra -- so glad you enjoyed my sultry entry here! ;) Have a great evening! :) ;)