Mmm...The Taste of Winter's Passion
We've always had a thing fo each other...13 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Oh the joy of such a kiss in such a restricted syllable verse!
That sense of touch caresses 'my tongue' - oh so cold.
Coincidentally, I have Jack painting windowpanes in my recent non-entry 5-7-5 verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Yvette,
Oh the joy of such a kiss in such a restricted syllable verse!
That sense of touch caresses 'my tongue' - oh so cold.
Coincidentally, I have Jack painting windowpanes in my recent non-entry 5-7-5 verse.
Mark
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thanx for stopping in, Mark -- good to hear from you as it's been a while!! ;) I''ll have give ol' Jack a look-see...Take care! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Mmmm. The Taste of Winter's Passion, has the proper formatting and makes it a personal conquest to swap snow kisses with Jack. Nice.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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This 3-5-3, Mmmm. The Taste of Winter's Passion, has the proper formatting and makes it a personal conquest to swap snow kisses with Jack. Nice.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thanx for the read and review, Bill! :) ;)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a nicely crafted little poem. Your 3-5-3 is nicely formatted. Your topic is well-written. I enjoyed the magical photo your chose to accompany your poem. I hope you do well in the contest. You have a solid entry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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What a nicely crafted little poem. Your 3-5-3 is nicely formatted. Your topic is well-written. I enjoyed the magical photo your chose to accompany your poem. I hope you do well in the contest. You have a solid entry.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your comments, Cindy - much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great day! :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Fabulous imagery in this 3-5-3 poem.
An excellent entry for the contest, presented beautifully!
Good luck in the voting booth...
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Hello :)
Fabulous imagery in this 3-5-3 poem.
An excellent entry for the contest, presented beautifully!
Good luck in the voting booth...
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very nice 3-5-3, Anonymous Poet.
Good use of metaphor in comparing fresh snowflakes on the tongue to a frigid kiss from old Jack Frost himself.
Your accompanying picture depicts something I think we all did as kids. At least those of us who lived in colder climates where it snows.
I wish you luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Very nice 3-5-3, Anonymous Poet.
Good use of metaphor in comparing fresh snowflakes on the tongue to a frigid kiss from old Jack Frost himself.
Your accompanying picture depicts something I think we all did as kids. At least those of us who lived in colder climates where it snows.
I wish you luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Your review really hit the 'smile-meter' this morning, sir -- thanx so much for your wonderful comments! :) ;) Take care of your and 'the little gal'! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from tfawcus
Manna from heaven! Free ice lollies! Loved doing this as a kid. Wouldn't mind it now, either. Just over 100F outside at the moment. Even hotter last week.
The softness of the assonance in melt/caress/kiss is perfect for your poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Manna from heaven! Free ice lollies! Loved doing this as a kid. Wouldn't mind it now, either. Just over 100F outside at the moment. Even hotter last week.
The softness of the assonance in melt/caress/kiss is perfect for your poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
Comment from Christine C Autry
I liked it it was good reading. Short but made so much good sence. Right down my allie. Thanks for sharing. It was enjoyed. I appreciate your work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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I liked it it was good reading. Short but made so much good sence. Right down my allie. Thanks for sharing. It was enjoyed. I appreciate your work.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
Comment from Jennifer Carr
This is an excellent 3-5-3 piece. I was just thinking about snowflakes and bam, here is a fantastic poem. Well done :) the picture also is very magical. I love it all
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 piece. I was just thinking about snowflakes and bam, here is a fantastic poem. Well done :) the picture also is very magical. I love it all
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
I like in a tropical country and had my first experience with snow in 2011 winter when I visited the States. Ooh, it was wonderful... And so I appreciate your 3-5-3 poem about Mr Jack Frost's kiss. Romantic and light.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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I like in a tropical country and had my first experience with snow in 2011 winter when I visited the States. Ooh, it was wonderful... And so I appreciate your 3-5-3 poem about Mr Jack Frost's kiss. Romantic and light.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
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You're welcome!
Correction on my part...my first line should be "I live in a..."
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
You've communicated so much with such a small amount of wiggle room. The photo is perfect, and the winter theme fits the cold front descending on the U.S. right now.Good luck with your contest entry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You've communicated so much with such a small amount of wiggle room. The photo is perfect, and the winter theme fits the cold front descending on the U.S. right now.Good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments - much appreciated! ;) Take care! :)
