Caught Naked
Swimming nude feels awesome.19 total reviews
Comment from CathyM
LOL Humorous poem it made me want to dare to peek. For such a short poem you captured the lightheartedness and freedom of swimming au natural. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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LOL Humorous poem it made me want to dare to peek. For such a short poem you captured the lightheartedness and freedom of swimming au natural. Nice job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I am glad that you were enticed, lol. I live on a private farm that has a lake and a pool. My hubby and I ( 52 years married) have a splashing good time. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Wow! You certainly have made effective use of all eleven syllables in
this excellent 3-5-3. The artwork and the poem make the perfect pair
to express the sense of freedom.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Wow! You certainly have made effective use of all eleven syllables in
this excellent 3-5-3. The artwork and the poem make the perfect pair
to express the sense of freedom.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I thank you kindly for reading and the nice review. I have a private pool and lake on our farm so there really isn't any chance of being caught.
My hubby and I have many fun splashing times.
Have a great day.
Brigitte
Comment from elmorose
This gave me a smile this morning. On a frigid morning I needed both a glimpse of summer and some humor. Your poem fit the bill. It always amazes me how much can be said in just a few words. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This gave me a smile this morning. On a frigid morning I needed both a glimpse of summer and some humor. Your poem fit the bill. It always amazes me how much can be said in just a few words. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I thank you kindly for reading and the nice review. I have a private pool and lake on our farm so there really isn't any chance of being caught.
My hubby and I have many fun splashing times.
Have a great day.
Brigitte
Comment from livelylinda
Brigitte: this made me laugh! Getting into a hot tub naked is also sooooo refreshing. And when you do it at 2 a.m. but know the old man next door can plainly see you out his upstairs window, it is especially fun! Best wishes on the contest outcome. Linda
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Brigitte: this made me laugh! Getting into a hot tub naked is also sooooo refreshing. And when you do it at 2 a.m. but know the old man next door can plainly see you out his upstairs window, it is especially fun! Best wishes on the contest outcome. Linda
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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I thank you kindly for reading and the nice review. I have a private pool and lake on our farm so there really isn't any chance of being caught.
My hubby and I have many fun splashing times. No neighbors to tantalize. Glad it made you smile.
Have a great day.
Brigitte
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Caught Naked, has the proper formatting and finds that the seaside reflects well on you. Skinny dipping is in order.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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This 3-5-3, Caught Naked, has the proper formatting and finds that the seaside reflects well on you. Skinny dipping is in order.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times.
Thanks for reading.
Anon
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a great freeing pastime. I would love to swim in a pool at night. It's below zero where I am today. UGH... Love your topic and your 3-5-3 format is nicely done. I hope you do well in the contest. Enjoy that pool. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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What a great freeing pastime. I would love to swim in a pool at night. It's below zero where I am today. UGH... Love your topic and your 3-5-3 format is nicely done. I hope you do well in the contest. Enjoy that pool. :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times.
Thanks for reading.
Anon
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
That sounds like a lot of fun. I don't have a private swimming pool so it's not an option. A late night swim where you just towel dry and fall into bed for the night. Now that would help with insomnia.
Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
That sounds like a lot of fun. I don't have a private swimming pool so it's not an option. A late night swim where you just towel dry and fall into bed for the night. Now that would help with insomnia.
Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times. Yes, a night swim is soothing before bed.
Thanks for reading.
Anon
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very funny!
Once I actually visited a nude beach with my wife and her girlfriend. The ocean water was frigid although we sat in our bathing, not birthday, suits. The women speculated on what would happen to the nude man when he came from his dip in the cold water - with his bare ass away from them! LOL
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Very funny!
Once I actually visited a nude beach with my wife and her girlfriend. The ocean water was frigid although we sat in our bathing, not birthday, suits. The women speculated on what would happen to the nude man when he came from his dip in the cold water - with his bare ass away from them! LOL
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times. I have never visited a nude beach, I would probably blush "all over". I can specalute on what that man would look like, lol.
Thanks for reading.
Anon
Comment from Dean Kuch
Of course it feels awesome, Anonymous Poet. You're getting back to your fetal roots, when you were but an unborn baby in your mothers womb swimming in amniotic fluid.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Of course it feels awesome, Anonymous Poet. You're getting back to your fetal roots, when you were but an unborn baby in your mothers womb swimming in amniotic fluid.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times. Back to my roots, OMG, that was soooo long ago. Can't even remember what I did yesterday!
Thanks for reading.
Anon
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Thank you Dear MR. Dean, master of animation; you make me dance with your comments.
Cheers on this cold day!
brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very wel-written 3-5-3 poem about swimming naked in the sea until you are caught then you have to cover up very quickly before the photo is taken as proof.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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A very wel-written 3-5-3 poem about swimming naked in the sea until you are caught then you have to cover up very quickly before the photo is taken as proof.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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You made me chuckle. In the privacy on our farm, the lake and pool offer my hubby and I splashing good times.
Thanks for reading.
Anon
