Zebras on foot
3-5-3 curiosity5 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, This is a really cute 3-5-3, my friend. That's an awesome story in your notes. I think I'd rather listen to the comical zebra directing traffic rather than an angry yeller. lol. I can see how it was a success. Good luck! ~Kerry
  |
lol, This is a really cute 3-5-3, my friend. That's an awesome story in your notes. I think I'd rather listen to the comical zebra directing traffic rather than an angry yeller. lol. I can see how it was a success. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
Comment from sfharper
Good use of imagery inside your poem to explain a concrete situation that can connect with any reader. Nice use of image to tie to the poem. Nice and short and sweet. Enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
|
Good use of imagery inside your poem to explain a concrete situation that can connect with any reader. Nice use of image to tie to the poem. Nice and short and sweet. Enjoyable read.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
-
Glad you enjoyed the read..I thought it was an amusing tidbit and wanted to share.
Thanks for the 5 star vote ... Hope you have a nice day.
Ciao!
Comment from Sally Law
What an interesting way to solve a traffic problem. I enjoyed your curious photo and remarks to clarify exactly I was looking at. Your added text helped me understand the "Zebra" and his role in your country. Thank you. That really helped me appreciate it even more.
All my best to you and in the 3-5-3 poetry writing contest.
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
What an interesting way to solve a traffic problem. I enjoyed your curious photo and remarks to clarify exactly I was looking at. Your added text helped me understand the "Zebra" and his role in your country. Thank you. That really helped me appreciate it even more.
All my best to you and in the 3-5-3 poetry writing contest.
Sally :+)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Ciao Sally!
I don't come from Bolivia ..I just thought it would be an interesting entry when I found it by chance on Internet a couple of months ago .
I come from Italy !
I just did an entry on my beautiful country.
Ciao Sally!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
It looks like a used car lot and the "zebra" is trying to get
customers to come in. He matches to crosswalk stripes nicely.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
It looks like a used car lot and the "zebra" is trying to get
customers to come in. He matches to crosswalk stripes nicely.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Thanks rsport for your positive review!
it just hit me that it would be a great contest theme :oddities around the world.
Ciao!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
A very interesting three-five-three poem. Now, the artwork was totally needed to tell the entire tale. However, your Author's notes also fill in some information.
I wish you luck in the contest. And, I will look for a dancing zebra at an intersection near me,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
Hi there,
A very interesting three-five-three poem. Now, the artwork was totally needed to tell the entire tale. However, your Author's notes also fill in some information.
I wish you luck in the contest. And, I will look for a dancing zebra at an intersection near me,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
I'm glad you found my short poem amusing .. (Biggrin)
Often I have trouble finding a suitable title .. ....Dancing zebras ...would have been a great choice too.
Thanks for the 5 stars!
