A New Direction
Because it's never too late16 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
I like the idea of this poem and the way that you have expressed it. You have given a fresh face to the old cliché of the well-worn path. It takes effort to forge fresh paths, but can be a rewarding endeavour.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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I like the idea of this poem and the way that you have expressed it. You have given a fresh face to the old cliché of the well-worn path. It takes effort to forge fresh paths, but can be a rewarding endeavour.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for those awesome comments, Tony -- always appreciate your stopping by! :) Take care out there! :) ;)
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
You have said a lot with only 30 syllables. Your rhyming is good and the artwork you chose is perfect for your message. I like the idea of forging a fresh path. We all get rather comfortable on smooth paths after a while. Your poem was a good reminder that comfortable isn't always best.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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You have said a lot with only 30 syllables. Your rhyming is good and the artwork you chose is perfect for your message. I like the idea of forging a fresh path. We all get rather comfortable on smooth paths after a while. Your poem was a good reminder that comfortable isn't always best.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for dropping by for the review, Stephanie, and for the encouraging comments -- much appreciated! :) :) Have a wonderful week ahead! :) ;)
Comment from Tootie
This is an awesome entry. Well written and said and great presentation. I wish you the very best in the contest. It's a good one! Love the title, too. Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This is an awesome entry. Well written and said and great presentation. I wish you the very best in the contest. It's a good one! Love the title, too. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Oh, Tootie, thank you for your wonderful comments -- they are so appreciated! :) :) Take care and have a great evening! :) ;)
Comment from meeshu
You have created some revelations here, maybe it is time for a change. or maybe we were on the wrong path all along. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, well done..
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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You have created some revelations here, maybe it is time for a change. or maybe we were on the wrong path all along. Your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, well done..
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thanx, dude --- this took waaaaay longer than it should have -- my muse was on vacation this afternoon and it was a really long day... buuuuutt, Here 'tis! :) ;) Thanx for your great reaction here -- it is EXACTLY what I was 'shootin' for'! :) Have a wonderful evening, sir! :) ;)
Comment from Raul1
I like how you made this 30 syllables about second chances in life. It reminds me of how life should be by being nice to people. Thanks for sharing. A good write.
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I like how you made this 30 syllables about second chances in life. It reminds me of how life should be by being nice to people. Thanks for sharing. A good write.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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thx.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
Oh, I just love this piece. It feels like I'm taken back to the masters when I read this. Very Robert Frost. It has a very heroic feel to it. It's wonderful. And 30 syllables! Quite a feat. Congratulations. Dorinda
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Oh, I just love this piece. It feels like I'm taken back to the masters when I read this. Very Robert Frost. It has a very heroic feel to it. It's wonderful. And 30 syllables! Quite a feat. Congratulations. Dorinda
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Oh, Dorinda! :) ;) You just brightened up an otherwise gloomy Monday -- thank you for your wonderful comments and those bright stars! :) Here's wishing you a bright and happy week ahead! :) ;) Take care! :)
