My new boyfriend
Beggars can't be choosers, they say9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, My New Boyfriend, meets the challenge restrictions and introduces someone's new flame. He face is lickity clean.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
This thirty-syllable poem, My New Boyfriend, meets the challenge restrictions and introduces someone's new flame. He face is lickity clean.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review Bill.
Comment from sfharper
I appreciate the humor in this poem, both visual, and in the feeling of being all wet, both visually and textually. Not bad for an internet find, just teasing. Good work about a modern phenomenon.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
I appreciate the humor in this poem, both visual, and in the feeling of being all wet, both visually and textually. Not bad for an internet find, just teasing. Good work about a modern phenomenon.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019
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Many tha ms. Jen
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I enjoyed your lighthearted and sweet topic of choice for this writing prompt and contest. Your rhyming pattern throughout made your 30 syllables fun to read. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
I enjoyed your lighthearted and sweet topic of choice for this writing prompt and contest. Your rhyming pattern throughout made your 30 syllables fun to read. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much Cindy. So glad you like it.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha.
Well, Anonymous Poet, if Brett loves dogs and dogs love Brett, you could do a lot worse.
Dogs are said to be very good judges of character.
Speaking of "good judges", good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
Hahaha.
Well, Anonymous Poet, if Brett loves dogs and dogs love Brett, you could do a lot worse.
Dogs are said to be very good judges of character.
Speaking of "good judges", good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2019
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Thanks Dean, I am so glad you liked my bit of humour, seems the voters don't but hey ho.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, well if he sleeps with his dog you may have a problem on your hands! You made me smile with your 30 syllable poem, good luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
He he he, well if he sleeps with his dog you may have a problem on your hands! You made me smile with your 30 syllable poem, good luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from victor 66
Well, if you're going by character reference, I believe animals are at the top of the heap when it comes to honesty and true affection. I'd say, you found a keeper. Very nice thirty syllable poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
Well, if you're going by character reference, I believe animals are at the top of the heap when it comes to honesty and true affection. I'd say, you found a keeper. Very nice thirty syllable poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Many thanks.
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You bet.
Comment from RodG
Hope this guy is worth it! I did get a chuckle out of this and how this bottom-of-the-barrel catch is described. I'll never be a fan of monorhyming however.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
Hope this guy is worth it! I did get a chuckle out of this and how this bottom-of-the-barrel catch is described. I'll never be a fan of monorhyming however.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thanks for the review
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you, I just fell off my chair laughing. This is as cute and sweet as it gets. The picture was absolutely perfect. A winner for the contest and a delight to my day.
All my best,
Sal ,+)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
Thank you, I just fell off my chair laughing. This is as cute and sweet as it gets. The picture was absolutely perfect. A winner for the contest and a delight to my day.
All my best,
Sal ,+)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much. I love your review
Comment from meeshu
this is great, I appreciate the best but I'm settling for less. Warren Zevon said that. I love the sentiment. great job and good luck..
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
this is great, I appreciate the best but I'm settling for less. Warren Zevon said that. I love the sentiment. great job and good luck..
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thanks a lot Meeshu. So glad you like it.