The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Popo, Izla, Me and You"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from sfharper
Very unusual twisting of an ancient tale around how you related and how you've found love and want even more. Lovely illustration and I can see it is quite heartfelt. Enjoyed reading it. Your rhymes work well together.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Very unusual twisting of an ancient tale around how you related and how you've found love and want even more. Lovely illustration and I can see it is quite heartfelt. Enjoyed reading it. Your rhymes work well together.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and confidence strengthening words. God Bless you
Comment from Wabigoon
The horses strain, they want to give this a six, but I must control them and I do not think you have revealed this mystery, wonderful and awful as it is, as well as you can. I think, for one, you cannot do it in one poem. You are dealing with two enormous mountains that represent much of what "MesoAmerica" meant and means to us here in North America. I want these myths, stories revealed from the inside and don't feel you have quite done it. Please, try again.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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The horses strain, they want to give this a six, but I must control them and I do not think you have revealed this mystery, wonderful and awful as it is, as well as you can. I think, for one, you cannot do it in one poem. You are dealing with two enormous mountains that represent much of what "MesoAmerica" meant and means to us here in North America. I want these myths, stories revealed from the inside and don't feel you have quite done it. Please, try again.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review, No just a liberal comparison of 2 couples going through the strife of love, what I call a tale of old retold, God Bless
Comment from Earl Corp
I've read this poem twice now and still have a difficulty understanding it. On one hand you have the ancient couple and the other is about you and your wife. Where I become confused is the ancient woman died, im not sure if your wife did also. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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I've read this poem twice now and still have a difficulty understanding it. On one hand you have the ancient couple and the other is about you and your wife. Where I become confused is the ancient woman died, im not sure if your wife did also. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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close, I almost did while in a coma after a kidney transplant, she did the praying in our case, she is my caretaker. Thank you for the review. God Bless you.
Comment from His Grayness
I found this work to be very rare and deeply interesting, also very well presented in all dimensions with no ideas from me to improve upon it in any way. My thanks to this author for a truly excellent work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I found this work to be very rare and deeply interesting, also very well presented in all dimensions with no ideas from me to improve upon it in any way. My thanks to this author for a truly excellent work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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PreAztec history and tales are something I like to compare with events of today .
More in the works coming soon.
God Bless you for the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is certainly a uniquely-written and original tale that you've put to paper here -- a wonderful story of love and devotion for the ages! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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This is certainly a uniquely-written and original tale that you've put to paper here -- a wonderful story of love and devotion for the ages! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) ;)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your time and supportive complements. The preAztec culture has many legends I'd like to compare with events today in the works.
God Bless you for the review.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. Your illustration is quite appropriate for the poem and lends clarity to the story you are comparing with your own. There was a Pixar animated short called "Lava" which this story also reminds me of. I wonder if it was also inspired by the Mexican folk legend you mention.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for sharing. Your illustration is quite appropriate for the poem and lends clarity to the story you are comparing with your own. There was a Pixar animated short called "Lava" which this story also reminds me of. I wonder if it was also inspired by the Mexican folk legend you mention.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and rating, I am extremely Greatful for it, I did not many reviews for this particular poem.
I will down load or Netflix Lava to check sounds like it is similar.
God Bless you and your family.