Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Rhonnie,

Another very nicely written piece here, my friend.

A lovely image effectively complements your verse and "takes us there."

Nothing here I can see to suggest you consider improving upon.

Thanks so much for sharing your work.

Jan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Sweet romantic words here and company in the early evening is a pleasurable experience, I often watch the sunset over the sea with my friend, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

HELLO DOLLY: I thank you for your sweet romantic review. Dolly, I love your dress in the picture here. It has my eyes agape. Another reason that I like it...I can see your perfect shape. Cascading down from your delicate crown your silky golden locks. Another thing about your dress...it covers your, "warm woolly socks." (smile.) I know that the girl in the picture, is not really you. But that's how you look...from my point of view. I shall continue looking...without your permission I'd never touch. The way your friend is looking at me...he doesn't like me very much. Thank you for being, Dolly...feminine grace no other no other woman can fill. Actually you mean more to me...than a mouse up on the hill. God bless you, Dolly. Cordially: rhonnie69.