Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "I Want To Change "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
4 total reviews
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Great spiritual poem entry. Very good for reflection. You are very good at getting rhyming words with good flow. I like the "I want to change" - there is always room for improvement. Nice picture. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Great spiritual poem entry. Very good for reflection. You are very good at getting rhyming words with good flow. I like the "I want to change" - there is always room for improvement. Nice picture. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem for the Spiritual Poem contest. It seemed so heart felt and so full of loving and very descriptive words. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This is a very well written poem for the Spiritual Poem contest. It seemed so heart felt and so full of loving and very descriptive words. The art work you chose goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review and Kind words of encouragement. God Bless you.
Comment from Earl Corp
As far as I am concerned this is the winning entry, you have my vote. Your poem rhymed, made, sense, was spiritual, and invoked emotions within the reader. You hit all four of the criteria I use to rate poetry. The artwork you chose is awesome! One question: Shouldn't lead be leads?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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As far as I am concerned this is the winning entry, you have my vote. Your poem rhymed, made, sense, was spiritual, and invoked emotions within the reader. You hit all four of the criteria I use to rate poetry. The artwork you chose is awesome! One question: Shouldn't lead be leads?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review and words encouragement.
Yes, an oversight trying to finish the poem before the time expired.
I will correct the spelling,
God Bless you and your family.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the flow in your words here and this sounds like a song you would sing in church, I could here the tune coming though in your words! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I love the flow in your words here and this sounds like a song you would sing in church, I could here the tune coming though in your words! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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My exact thoughts when written for this contest. God Bless you and Thank You for the Kind words and review.