Eye of the Ocean
Within every wave, a vision8 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Mystery poet!
I just gave you your 8th. vote and just in the nick of time , I believe.
This contest asked voters to judge the entries firstly via the illustrations : I found yours a great eye catching choice.
Your poem is a thoughtful , meaningful idea .
Picture and poem together make a very refined and profond entry.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Ciao Mystery poet!
I just gave you your 8th. vote and just in the nick of time , I believe.
This contest asked voters to judge the entries firstly via the illustrations : I found yours a great eye catching choice.
Your poem is a thoughtful , meaningful idea .
Picture and poem together make a very refined and profond entry.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Oh, you are too kind with your comments, Tempeste! :) ;) Thank you so very much and I'm so glad it made an impression on you! :) ;) Thank you for your vote and for your review -- have a wonderful week ahead!! ;) ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, I do love the ocean, and your poem captures that mysterious element that makes 'the deep' so appealing. As much as I love this little gem of a 5-7-5, it makes me a little sad because I'll never again dive her depths... (growing old is a bitter pill sometimes...*sigh* But maybe I'll win a lottery and buy a beach house and move... LOL)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Oh, I do love the ocean, and your poem captures that mysterious element that makes 'the deep' so appealing. As much as I love this little gem of a 5-7-5, it makes me a little sad because I'll never again dive her depths... (growing old is a bitter pill sometimes...*sigh* But maybe I'll win a lottery and buy a beach house and move... LOL)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Hey, let me know when you do, ma'am -- I'll come help you and Miss Priss celebrate!! :) ;) Thanx for dropping by! :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Visionary. The ocean is an infinite inspiration to writers, musicians, painters. This poem has not just a single interpretation but speaks individually according to our inner waves and tunes.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Visionary. The ocean is an infinite inspiration to writers, musicians, painters. This poem has not just a single interpretation but speaks individually according to our inner waves and tunes.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review, Donka - always appreciated! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from Teresa Alford
Fantastic. The picture immediately captures the attention. Then the amazing poem further enhances what the reader saw in the picture. Here ya go...6 stars! Teresa. ";-)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Fantastic. The picture immediately captures the attention. Then the amazing poem further enhances what the reader saw in the picture. Here ya go...6 stars! Teresa. ";-)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Wow, Teresa!! Thank you for the review and for those wonderful stars - so glad you enjoyed my ocean's eye! :) ;) LOL! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Best picture of the ocean I have ever seen. That is a great presentation for the contest. That is also the perfect name for the picture. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Best picture of the ocean I have ever seen. That is a great presentation for the contest. That is also the perfect name for the picture. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Wow, Bill!! Thank you for the review and for those wonderful stars - so glad you enjoyed my ocean's eye! :) ;) LOL! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
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You?re very welcome!
Comment from Christine C Autry
Very well said I enjoyed this and made you think. Beautiful artwork I love the ocean and the sun Thank you for sharing. This was short but sweet I liked it.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Very well said I enjoyed this and made you think. Beautiful artwork I love the ocean and the sun Thank you for sharing. This was short but sweet I liked it.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review, Christine - much appreciated! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
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You are Welcome.
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
This is very cool and I know I've seen a show on television of the person who takes these photographs - amazing picture! Your words went perfect with this photo.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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This is very cool and I know I've seen a show on television of the person who takes these photographs - amazing picture! Your words went perfect with this photo.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the review, Kathleen - always appreciated! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Eye of the Ocean, has the syllables in the right place and you employ a great tunnel shot that feeds into your words. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This 5-7-5, Eye of the Ocean, has the syllables in the right place and you employ a great tunnel shot that feeds into your words. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thanx, Bill. :) Yvette
