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Comment from country ranch writer
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Oh! But to dream of things with wings! A horse is a horse of course of course with wings or otherwise. nice work up for your poem.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

Comment from meeshu
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This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm. flying knights would certainly change the game. as would rooks with tiny archers. we might be on to something, Rhonnie..........................meeshu

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
    HELO MEESHU: Thank you for viewing my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from phill doran
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Hello Rhonnie
Well, I know of a plant called the 'Black Knight' Butterfly Bush, but I am not aware of any butterflies with manes, or horses with such delicate and fabulous wings. Still, I've not seen everything in the world as yet, so perhaps today will be my lucky day?
I wish you well with your continued writing. This piece is enigmatic, for you!
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
    HELLO PHILL: Thank you for viewing my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.