Of Hearts and Heartaches
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "When Two Hearts Become One"Poems about falling in or out of love.
5 total reviews
Comment from Xia Thornwood
A sweet love poem. Beautiful ideas of lonliness fulfilled. The language is both understandable and poetic, a difficult feat. The one thing that may improve the presentation of the poem is a space before and a space after each hyphen. Otherwise it looks like a compound word. Altogether, a touching poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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A sweet love poem. Beautiful ideas of lonliness fulfilled. The language is both understandable and poetic, a difficult feat. The one thing that may improve the presentation of the poem is a space before and a space after each hyphen. Otherwise it looks like a compound word. Altogether, a touching poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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hank you for all the stars and the review. I'll follow your suggestion.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Hi Mitchell,
If I had a 6 to give for this I would. I adored your repeating line and I loved all the sentiment that you offered in this contest entry. I think this is very strong! I think that you have expressed yourself for hopefully a real person in your life. I kind of want to show it to somebody I love for Valentines Day - it is a perfect sentiment. Maybe it will be the winner and then I will bookcase it! Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Hi Mitchell,
If I had a 6 to give for this I would. I adored your repeating line and I loved all the sentiment that you offered in this contest entry. I think this is very strong! I think that you have expressed yourself for hopefully a real person in your life. I kind of want to show it to somebody I love for Valentines Day - it is a perfect sentiment. Maybe it will be the winner and then I will bookcase it! Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the stars , as well as the review and sentiments. As far as winning goes, from your mouth to the committee's ears.
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Well considering my luck with the committee, you may not want that... LOL Cheers, Fonda
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Yeah, LOL!
Comment from TheStoryMan
When two hearts become one you have found your soul mate - your quest complete - your very reason for existence - look at eagles for example - life mates forever - nature gives us so much to learn by - yet we seem to ignore her - your poem reflects truth of how we should become one with the one we choose to spend eternity with - thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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When two hearts become one you have found your soul mate - your quest complete - your very reason for existence - look at eagles for example - life mates forever - nature gives us so much to learn by - yet we seem to ignore her - your poem reflects truth of how we should become one with the one we choose to spend eternity with - thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you. The stars and your review are ever so greatly appreciated!
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, this is so sweet and romantic. I love any poem that speaks of a lifetime of love. I have loved my husband forty seven years, forty three as his wife. It is the most wonderful kind of love in my opinion. My best to you and yours, and in the contest.
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Aw, this is so sweet and romantic. I love any poem that speaks of a lifetime of love. I have loved my husband forty seven years, forty three as his wife. It is the most wonderful kind of love in my opinion. My best to you and yours, and in the contest.
Sally :+)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much! Not only for all the wonderful stars, but the nice review and best wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the devotion in these words, the sharing and the sacrifices made to please each other, a warm and loving write written with honesty, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dollyx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed the devotion in these words, the sharing and the sacrifices made to please each other, a warm and loving write written with honesty, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dollyx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you ever so much! The stars, the review and the wishes really mean a lot!