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Publicity Call.

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Comment from meeshu
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a trick to get you to freeze to death! oh, what wicked ways. You have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, very good, rhonnie...................meeshu

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed your words here Rhonnie, a pretty love poem. The line 'I hastened out anticipating love', might sound better, 'I anticipated our love', best regards, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
    HELLO DOLLY: This is me, Dolly...it's so nice to know that you like my song. Thank you for your recommendation that I say... "I anticipated our love." YES. That, DOES, sound better. Thank you for your help. As usual, You are appreciated. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.