Julia [from the Fiction Department]
The femme-fatale of 19848 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 7-9-7, Julia (from the Fiction Department), has the syllables in the right places and made 1984 a good year for Winston.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This 7-9-7, Julia (from the Fiction Department), has the syllables in the right places and made 1984 a good year for Winston.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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LOL! :) ;) Thanx for dropping by, Bill! :) ;)
Comment from samantha0930
Is the Fiction Department supposed to be the book that your character is from? It would've been better to say so in the notes rather throwing it into the title. I do like the poem itself though, it has a good message.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Is the Fiction Department supposed to be the book that your character is from? It would've been better to say so in the notes rather throwing it into the title. I do like the poem itself though, it has a good message.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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That's how she is referred to int the book, Samantha, and her last name is never given. :) ;) Thanx for the review -- take care! :) ;)
Comment from zlp22
Very good indifferent type of poem. Many people think that nothing can go wrong in live. Sometimes they are right but many times they are wrong. Good word flow and picture. Beauty only lasts so long.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Very good indifferent type of poem. Many people think that nothing can go wrong in live. Sometimes they are right but many times they are wrong. Good word flow and picture. Beauty only lasts so long.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review of my "Classic Character 7-9-7" -- much appreciated. :) Have a wonderful week ahead!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Everything, Dear Mystery Writer!
Everything that could and would and will go wrong...well...could and would and will go wrong! :) I taught 1984 for years when I was a 12th grade English instructor. My students were fascinated by the premiss of the novel, even more so when we made real world connections between the novel and today's reality!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Everything, Dear Mystery Writer!
Everything that could and would and will go wrong...well...could and would and will go wrong! :) I taught 1984 for years when I was a 12th grade English instructor. My students were fascinated by the premiss of the novel, even more so when we made real world connections between the novel and today's reality!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Of course it could...and did...and they had it all on tape! :) ;) Hey, were you that crazy Senior English teacher that dressed up in nutty costumes and danced around the room in Honors English to make sure the nerds learned all their writing and poetry and literature because they couldn't help but learn it?!!! Mrs. Stroud is a hero that was mine and she was the one to really break through the science/math nerd in me and made me appreciate all those things!! :) So, good for you, Diane!! :) ;) Thanx for the review, ma'am -- and CONGRATULATIONS on your win for obscure words!...:) But, of course, an awesome English teacher whose also an awesome poet would have that one, hands down!! :) ;) You rock, Beautiful Lady! :) ;)
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Yes, Ma'am...or Sir!
I could tell you stories upon stories of my costumes and "get-ups" used to inspire and motivate my students. My absolute favorite was when my students read "The Kite Runner" = my favorite novel - and I dressed as a Muslim woman - complete with Burqa and hijab and simply walked into my classroom without saying a word. Of course, no one knew it was me, as my face was totally hidden...Upon the reveal, both male and female students - if they so desired - also donned the clothing. Absolutely amazing discussions re: inability to breathe, inability to express one's individual identity, inability to be "seen." GAWD! I so miss those teaching moments!
Take Care!
diane
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The blonde here identifies as a ma'am... LOL! LOL! :) :) :) Thank you from the heart of all your former students...and I mean that with all my heart! :) ;) ......full burqa, eh? ... and they say us math nerds are weird...LOL! :)
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I just rec'd the most heartwarming note/message from one of my students who will be graduating this December from nursing school thanking me for guiding and inspiring her as a writer and person. Priceless... Did I mention how much I miss teaching? :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
"You're only a rebel from the waist downwards," Winston tells Julia! He he he, I enjoyed your entry for this contest! The fun begins, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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"You're only a rebel from the waist downwards," Winston tells Julia! He he he, I enjoyed your entry for this contest! The fun begins, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Yes! There were a number of quotes I tried to get in here, but I ended up 'settling' because they really only worked with 'more syllables' - LOL! :) ;) thanx for the review, Dolly! :)
Comment from Raul1
For sure she met Mr. Winston. I like how you made this poem. It is a simple write with a few words. I see no mistakes. It is well written. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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For sure she met Mr. Winston. I like how you made this poem. It is a simple write with a few words. I see no mistakes. It is well written. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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thnx.
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You're welcome
Comment from Gloria ....
HAHA, a fantastic character commitment to the contest in this one. Anyone can see absolutely nothing will be going wrong with Julia in charge.
Most fun and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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HAHA, a fantastic character commitment to the contest in this one. Anyone can see absolutely nothing will be going wrong with Julia in charge.
Most fun and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much for your review, Gloria! ;) Have a great evening!
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, what could possibly go wrong? that is so great. and your rhythm is so on. good luck..
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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You have created some great images here, what could possibly go wrong? that is so great. and your rhythm is so on. good luck..
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, dude! ;) Enjoy your evening! ;)
