Your Tempo Flows
The song of life will continue...12 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
We tend to judge people by their status ....a doctor is more worthy of our praise cause he saves lives per example .. God does not judge his children like that.
Those that do community work to help out those less fortunate ...their work is as important as the doctor 's who saves lives to God.
God is happy if we all do our part within our limits ...he designed us in his loving image ..
Even helping an elderly cross the road does not go un-noticed by God and it makes him rejoice .
Even the smallest good willed gesture towards someone will make this world a better place.
It might seem insignificant but we all know that the ocean is made up of an infinite amount of drops of water.
Each good deed we do is one of those drops..
If we see the world through caring loving eyes our actions will follow accordingly.
A poem has many interpretation and this is mine.
I thought your poem was beautiful . Your phrasing is powerful .. You know how to put your thoughts down in a very touching way.
The picture reflects God's essence ..
Beauty, tranquility, harmony.
Obviously we feel a connection with God in such a paradisiacal place.
I can't believe that no one gave you a sixer.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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We tend to judge people by their status ....a doctor is more worthy of our praise cause he saves lives per example .. God does not judge his children like that.
Those that do community work to help out those less fortunate ...their work is as important as the doctor 's who saves lives to God.
God is happy if we all do our part within our limits ...he designed us in his loving image ..
Even helping an elderly cross the road does not go un-noticed by God and it makes him rejoice .
Even the smallest good willed gesture towards someone will make this world a better place.
It might seem insignificant but we all know that the ocean is made up of an infinite amount of drops of water.
Each good deed we do is one of those drops..
If we see the world through caring loving eyes our actions will follow accordingly.
A poem has many interpretation and this is mine.
I thought your poem was beautiful . Your phrasing is powerful .. You know how to put your thoughts down in a very touching way.
The picture reflects God's essence ..
Beauty, tranquility, harmony.
Obviously we feel a connection with God in such a paradisiacal place.
I can't believe that no one gave you a sixer.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed reading your review for a couple of reasons reasons: because your opinions about God and life echo my own... about not categorising people, about good-willed people, and about "God's essence .. Beauty, tranquility, harmony."
Also I am overjoyed that you gave me a 6 star rating. When I wrote the poem it was so from my heart that I knew instinctively that it was good. I certainly hoped that other people would see its value, then you stepped up .... thank you. xx (maybe other reviewers had used up all their 6-stars by being generous-minded to other writers.)
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I'm so happy you found common ground reading my thoughts ..sometimes I go on these long rants ..I'm Italian ..we are very passionate and we love talking about matters that touch us
Personally when I read a piece that overwhelms me I wait till I have a six to vote it ..but that's me (biggrin).
Your poem was exceptional LisaMay.
I'm glad our paths met. (smile)
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So glad to meet you too! I have a very big grin on my face right now. I like passionate people who feel things deeply and I especially like people who only review when they have a six!!
Comment from sfharper
Good layout and consistency throughout the poem. I like the different examples followed by the effect upon yourself. I think it fits the spiritual topic well. Enjoyed reading it. Sorry no fixes to suggest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Good layout and consistency throughout the poem. I like the different examples followed by the effect upon yourself. I think it fits the spiritual topic well. Enjoyed reading it. Sorry no fixes to suggest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your review. Don't apologise for not finding anything to correct!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great imagery within your nature walk here, as you draw inspiration from what you say as the scene fulfills and nourishes your soul, a joy to read Lisa, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Great imagery within your nature walk here, as you draw inspiration from what you say as the scene fulfills and nourishes your soul, a joy to read Lisa, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thanks Dolly... I do enjoy writing about how I find such comfort in the natural world.... though there is so much to be upset about how other people don't respect nature and despoil the environment.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful way to describe worship. I love the way that you show us the worship of the trees raising up their branch arms and the music of the river and ending with the sense of God's presence walking with you.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Beautiful way to describe worship. I love the way that you show us the worship of the trees raising up their branch arms and the music of the river and ending with the sense of God's presence walking with you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Your comments show that you totally 'got' what I was trying to portray. Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from royowen
I agree with you LisaMay, God is all and in all, "We live and move..." A Beautifully written ode to the very core of our , the breath in our body the flesh on our bones, in tune with His creation. I loved this language rich work my friend, good luck in the contest, well done, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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I agree with you LisaMay, God is all and in all, "We live and move..." A Beautifully written ode to the very core of our , the breath in our body the flesh on our bones, in tune with His creation. I loved this language rich work my friend, good luck in the contest, well done, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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That is such a lovely supportive review you have written Roy, I am truly grateful and uplifted.
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Well done
Comment from Jamie P
It is so lovely to read a spiritual poem that doesn't directly tug at the image of "God". You manage your words very well to construct clear images. I love your poem! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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It is so lovely to read a spiritual poem that doesn't directly tug at the image of "God". You manage your words very well to construct clear images. I love your poem! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Kisses to you for appreciating my poem. I started it today and it just flowed out of me, so I must have been feeling the spirit within. (It was also a nice day and I was sitting in my window seat with a lovely view across the valley)
Comment from Christine C Autry
Yes I agree with you. I am more at piece in nature. Things seem to feel good there. Peaceful joy feels me in nature. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Yes I agree with you. I am more at piece in nature. Things seem to feel good there. Peaceful joy feels me in nature. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate it.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review Christine. Surrounded by nature is a good antidote to the cares of the world.
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You are Welcome.
Comment from trimple
Good evening, Lisa
Lovely to see this poem in my inbox.
I am not a religious person, however, I found this poem to be akin to how I also view the natural world around me and my place within it.
All three free verse stanzas lend beautifully to your views on where you feel most comfortable as one would say, walk through woodland with the veins of a river running through
its heart.
A fine contender for the competition and I wish you well in the booths.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Good evening, Lisa
Lovely to see this poem in my inbox.
I am not a religious person, however, I found this poem to be akin to how I also view the natural world around me and my place within it.
All three free verse stanzas lend beautifully to your views on where you feel most comfortable as one would say, walk through woodland with the veins of a river running through
its heart.
A fine contender for the competition and I wish you well in the booths.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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We are on the same page as they say, about how we fit with the natural world. Thanks for your good wishes Tracey.
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You're welcome :)
Here is a sad song with the most glorious lyrics for you to listen to :)
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You're welcome, Lisa.
:)
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What a delicious blast from the past. I adore Leonard Cohen and Jennifer Warnes. And that Proms performance is just stunningly, achingly beautiful. It always gives me chills anyway, the Joan of Arc story getting burned at the stake such a horrible death, and Leonard's lyrics obscure and imaginative to the point of exquisite delirium for me.
Thanks for putting something lovely into my evening. I have to go and visit a sick friend in hospital now, but i feel fortified. xx
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Indeed, Lisa, Leonard had a way with words that were almost otherworldly. J.Warnes lends such gravitas to this most beautiful song.
I hope that your friend will be up and about and enjoying all the little things in life again soon.
much love
tracey
Comment from Raul1
I like how you put this poem of flowing with the music. It feels spiritual and right to the point of how a person feels with music around him. I think this is good. Good work! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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I like how you put this poem of flowing with the music. It feels spiritual and right to the point of how a person feels with music around him. I think this is good. Good work! Good luck in the contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your encouraging comments about my poem, I appreciate you taking the time.
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You're welcome
Comment from meeshu
this is a wonderful piece, LisaMay. the language is stellar and gives it a cadence and pace that accelerates as the poem moves. excellent write....................meeshu
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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this is a wonderful piece, LisaMay. the language is stellar and gives it a cadence and pace that accelerates as the poem moves. excellent write....................meeshu
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your encouraging words. You refer to the pace accelerating... apart from "I throb with life", I thought I was slowing the pace down.... trying to refer to end of life.
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I was talking middle, could be me anticipating the conclusion.
