He Won't Follow in My Footsteps
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is a perfect 5-7-5. Beautiful presentation! Your three lines were perfectly centered from left/right to top/bottom. Great choice of font. Perfect artwork that had me laughing, causing me to laugh harder as I read through your poem.
This is a great contest entry!!
Gale
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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This is a perfect 5-7-5. Beautiful presentation! Your three lines were perfectly centered from left/right to top/bottom. Great choice of font. Perfect artwork that had me laughing, causing me to laugh harder as I read through your poem.
This is a great contest entry!!
Gale
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gale. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, He Won't Follow in My Footsteps, has the right set up and brings the end to lineage of family clowns. Wait! What about politics?
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This humorous 5-7-5, He Won't Follow in My Footsteps, has the right set up and brings the end to lineage of family clowns. Wait! What about politics?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Bill. I'm glad you liked this sillines..
Comment from Liberty Justice
That photo and revelation is do cute and darling; perfect for contest. I just gave you my thumbs up and NOW you are in 1st place by yourself. Congrsts excellent poem. Check out mine also. liberty justice
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That photo and revelation is do cute and darling; perfect for contest. I just gave you my thumbs up and NOW you are in 1st place by yourself. Congrsts excellent poem. Check out mine also. liberty justice
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review and support, Liberty J. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I'll be sure to do that. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from LisaMay
This cracked me up. I love it!
I really enjoy how these short poems can zing along with simple effect, to amuse (in this case), or inspire or educate... for those who have short attention spans!!
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This cracked me up. I love it!
I really enjoy how these short poems can zing along with simple effect, to amuse (in this case), or inspire or educate... for those who have short attention spans!!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lisa. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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Congratulations on your 3rd placing in the contest.
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And to you on your second placing with your piece that strikes too close to home. Lol. Catch you next go 'round.
Ron
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Thanks Ron... enjoy your dinner, eat up those greens!
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is a good choice of a humorous topic. It is well written for this type of poem. I like the picture you chose also. Good luck to your son. Maybe he will follow in your footsteps as a clown.
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This is a good choice of a humorous topic. It is well written for this type of poem. I like the picture you chose also. Good luck to your son. Maybe he will follow in your footsteps as a clown.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Bill. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from meeshu
this very short poem is delightful. and pretty funny. You have done a fine job with this, I wish you well in the upcoming contest..
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this very short poem is delightful. and pretty funny. You have done a fine job with this, I wish you well in the upcoming contest..
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Meeshu. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Teresa Alford
You met the challenge for writing a humorous 5 - 7 - 5 for the contest. This is a humorous poem and it gave me a laugh. Good luck in the contest. TA. ";-)
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You met the challenge for writing a humorous 5 - 7 - 5 for the contest. This is a humorous poem and it gave me a laugh. Good luck in the contest. TA. ";-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Teresa. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly thing.
Ron
