Sleeping beauty
7-9-7 poem11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
CONGRATULATIONS! :) ;) A wonderful offering for this contest -- you did a great job bringing our lovely Sleeping Beauty back to the forefront of our memories with your presentation! ;) Thank you and have a wonderful week ahead! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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CONGRATULATIONS! :) ;) A wonderful offering for this contest -- you did a great job bringing our lovely Sleeping Beauty back to the forefront of our memories with your presentation! ;) Thank you and have a wonderful week ahead! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, this was a great contest, I very much enjoyed the challenge****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
Hi dear poet. I just gave you my thumbs launching you into 3 rd place. Hope you win because photo is so endearing and romantic and your verses flow with perfect personifications as a lovely couple embrace. EXCELLENT. Read my writings, also. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Hi dear poet. I just gave you my thumbs launching you into 3 rd place. Hope you win because photo is so endearing and romantic and your verses flow with perfect personifications as a lovely couple embrace. EXCELLENT. Read my writings, also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, I do read and love your work, have done for some time
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, wonderful artwork indeed, and the romance is captured by your well-chosen words as well. It was refreshing to see this contest, and you've created a beautifully sentimental poem for it.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Oh, wonderful artwork indeed, and the romance is captured by your well-chosen words as well. It was refreshing to see this contest, and you've created a beautifully sentimental poem for it.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all syllables in this 7-9-7 that
movingly and accurately pinpoints the theme of the work--that only the
kiss of true love, which was foretold, could preserve life.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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You have made effective use of all syllables in this 7-9-7 that
movingly and accurately pinpoints the theme of the work--that only the
kiss of true love, which was foretold, could preserve life.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 7-9-7 poem about sleeping beauty, that is our beauty sleeping within us, waiting for the perfect right person to awake us with the way we need to be awaken.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 7-9-7 poem about sleeping beauty, that is our beauty sleeping within us, waiting for the perfect right person to awake us with the way we need to be awaken.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from samantha0930
I like the poem, although it seems to differ from the original story, since it was true love's kiss that was to wake her up, not just a kiss from any person with a kind and honest heart. Also, the contest prompt says that the poem should be in the character's point of view, whereas you seem just to have written a poem about Sleeping Beauty.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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I like the poem, although it seems to differ from the original story, since it was true love's kiss that was to wake her up, not just a kiss from any person with a kind and honest heart. Also, the contest prompt says that the poem should be in the character's point of view, whereas you seem just to have written a poem about Sleeping Beauty.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, I understand what you say and have altered some, but isn't pure honesty -true?
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Not necessarily--someone may be an honest person, but that doesn't mean that they love you.
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Then that is not pure honesty,? as my words state
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as your reply says it was true love that woke her not just pure or honest?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever rhyming 7-9-7, and I personally enjoy these short writes when they rhyme. Few words great meaning. The fairytale brought to life with a kiss, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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A clever rhyming 7-9-7, and I personally enjoy these short writes when they rhyme. Few words great meaning. The fairytale brought to life with a kiss, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done 7-9-7 poem which rhymes throughout and has alliteration in each line. I especially liked the second line - "requires honest lips." But in that picture, Sleeping Beauty doesn't look really impressed. lol.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Nicely done 7-9-7 poem which rhymes throughout and has alliteration in each line. I especially liked the second line - "requires honest lips." But in that picture, Sleeping Beauty doesn't look really impressed. lol.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Many thanks, I think she just woke up Ha! Ha! , I see what you mean
Comment from Christine C Autry
Very good love story in a short poem. But it said so much. Good artwork too. Thank You for your talent. I appreciate your work. Love anything on sleeping beauty.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Very good love story in a short poem. But it said so much. Good artwork too. Thank You for your talent. I appreciate your work. Love anything on sleeping beauty.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
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Your Welcome!
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Your Welcome!
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a good job of telling as much as you could of the Sleeping Beauty story in just twenty-three syllables. Your description is vivid, and your well-chosen words are emotional and powerful.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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This is a good job of telling as much as you could of the Sleeping Beauty story in just twenty-three syllables. Your description is vivid, and your well-chosen words are emotional and powerful.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
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You're welcome.
