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Undersea Fantasy

A Kyrielle Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This kyrielle, Undersea Fantasy, has the proper formatting and invites the readers to discover what this watery world could be all about. Nice.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
    Thank you for sharing your insights on my undersea fantasy!
Comment from samantha0930
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I liked your poem--it reads well, especially with the rhymes, and it sounds like a fun adventure. The picture also goes with it nicely, with the bubbles of water floating up kind of representing all the mystical things you're going to see.

I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    So glad you enjoyed my underwater fantasy for the kyrielle challenge!
Comment from kiwijenny
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I'd love too
I don't want to take the plunge just yet..maybe this summer. Lol
I like the kryielle form. But I'm not touching the tentacle that creeps..no way
God bless

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    So glad you enjoyed my underwater fantasy for the kyrielle challenge!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a well-written, lively, descriptive piece. The excited speaker
encourages the listener to join in and explore--to gather unforgettable
experiences.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
    So glad you enjoyed my underwater fantasy for the kyrielle challenge!