Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 472 "The Coming"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from robyn corum
Tom,
My, my, can you only imagine? I think words would actually be impossible - at least for me. *smile* The image is lovely - it's clear your daughter follows in your footsteps. *smile* Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Tom,
My, my, can you only imagine? I think words would actually be impossible - at least for me. *smile* The image is lovely - it's clear your daughter follows in your footsteps. *smile* Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you Robyn. I'll tell her you complimented her photo. That would be a stunning soul searching moment. I'm darn sure I wouldn't be "ready".
Comment from SueZen
Beautiful poem which touches me deeply.
Reading it brought similar experiences/sentiments to mind, as often go down
'memory lane', sort of 'reliving' my life and wondering where, when and why I had strayed from the 'Good Red Road' (Native Indian expression).
It took me half a lifetime to learn to overcome feelings of guilt and learn to forgive and love myself and others unconditionally - very liberating and consoling to connect with God, Jesus or whatever you choose to name the Divine Source of Creation and Love.
Superb photo to complement poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Beautiful poem which touches me deeply.
Reading it brought similar experiences/sentiments to mind, as often go down
'memory lane', sort of 'reliving' my life and wondering where, when and why I had strayed from the 'Good Red Road' (Native Indian expression).
It took me half a lifetime to learn to overcome feelings of guilt and learn to forgive and love myself and others unconditionally - very liberating and consoling to connect with God, Jesus or whatever you choose to name the Divine Source of Creation and Love.
Superb photo to complement poem.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you SueZen, Your review is touching too. I hadn't heard that phrase before. I think we can learn a lot from Native Americans.
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Thank and bless you for sweet response, Love Susan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the coming, and you have been a faithful servant and shared message and Ten Commandments and lifted the Lord to the air; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks the coming, and you have been a faithful servant and shared message and Ten Commandments and lifted the Lord to the air; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you ALD. I appreciate your review and comments. Lifted -by- the Lord
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is a very well written poem. I especially liked the images you used, and how you evoked the feelings associated with God's grace. I appreciate that you took a well known concept from scripture and made it come alive in your poetry.
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This is a very well written poem. I especially liked the images you used, and how you evoked the feelings associated with God's grace. I appreciate that you took a well known concept from scripture and made it come alive in your poetry.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you Bill Pinder. I appreciate your review and comments. The stars are most generous.
Comment from meeshu
Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. What really stands out is the smooth rhythm and cadence of this poem. Very well done, Treischel...................meeshu
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Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. I enjoyed reading this writing so much. What really stands out is the smooth rhythm and cadence of this poem. Very well done, Treischel...................meeshu
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
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Thank you meeshu.i am pleased you enjoyed the verse and flow.
